Eclipse of the Warrior

within the cloak
I lay forgotten
unmanned, unattended
silent to all that could see

clasping on I engraved my name

shivering from the rains of the doom
the soldiers marched forward

shhhhhhhhhh now all, will be well

the louder the warrior boots stomping the earth
the more I entrusted

heaving galloping horses
a miming in my mind
as their hooves slid darkly over my cage

trust me
as darkness
falls

we have survived another day

I leave my name
so etched within
as all
has been taken

lowly slunk into the earth
I sliced what what goodness from my life
to create my worth of dreams

of fear and dreams
I chose the forsaken,

as it was me
to carry them through

as will come a time

I shall only briefly past these shores again.

xxxxxx
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
to all who care and have the warrior within them. with such a beautiful down cushion of love and sincerity

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Comments (7)

agoodguy2have
interesting write sophia. ambiguous in it's statement and staccato in presentation. ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, sophiasummer,
As we etch ourselves into the present, may we all find the warrior within and goodness from my life to create my worth of dreams. Thank you for sharing.
freeatlast64847
Enigmatic and haunting. applause
caroljoyce
Interesting write, Sophia.
gardenhackle
Very nuanced and thought provoking. The easy path is not for the warrior.
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Nicely doneteddybear
sophiasummer
I thank you all for all your comments so honestly stated...

"I gave them shelter from the storm"
hug cool
angel
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