Fire of Love

If I could feel your body close to mine.
I think it would take my breath away.
To feel your lips upon mine.
Is a dream where I wish to stay.
We are locked together in the dance of life.
No wish to be free. Just you and me.
Looking like cut out pieces of a puzzle that fit just right.
My hand in your hand gives me strength to go on.
Knowing that my love is not alone.
You told me to take your hand.
You would show me the way.
If I would come out and play.
So I took the first step not knowing.
Of a love so consumed by the fire and it seemed to be forever growing.
The trust the faith the courage that you spoke of.
Was like gas on the embers of the fire of love.
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Posted: Aug 2010

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Ladybee42
oh so lovely happy -
'The trust the faith the courage that you spoke of.
Was like gas on the embers of the fire of love.'

thanks for sharing...thumbs up thumbs up
bouquet bouquet
caroljoyce
Potent words, Happy.
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Thank you Ladybee. This came from my heart. heart beating
Poetnumber1
A super write,indeed the fire of loveyay teddybear teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Happygolucky4u,
...consumed by the fire... One could certainly enjoy burning the candle at both ends when ablaze with the Fire of Love; but embers, now, they keep the fire going and forever growing... Enjoyed the love in this write!
boyshchrm6
"We are locked together in the dance of life.
No wish to be free. Just you and me.
Looking like cut out pieces of a puzzle that fit just right."
Great description Happy.thumbs up applause angel cool
Earlgreytea
[Knowing that my love is not alone]

this is such a deep and beautiful and little found sentiment..., very nice thank you...
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Words of love Caroljoyce thank you for your comment. I actually wrote this for my husband and I. It is a memoryblues
Macduff5
Hi Happy,

Totally romantic. I'm swooning. Beautifully written. bouquet
english57
I did enjoy your poem; thank you!
studecar
Great poem , full of fire . studecar professor
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by Happygolucky4u (159 Poems)
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