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makatka

Birds

At dusk
the birds come alive
companions of loneliness.
I'm smiling
rays
the setting sun.
I put my forehead on
to the glass
seeking relief.
At dusk
car sound
louder
they stopped singing
birds
Just an eagle owl
is not afraid
the hustle and bustle.
At dusk
I shut up
in cocoon heat
woven
from spider thread.
suspended
between waking up and sleeping.
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Posted: Oct 2019
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Didi7

My 'tomboy' days

My tomboy days were delightful,
Full of play, and climbing for fruits.
My tomboy days were just blissful,
Free of dresses and girlie pursuits.

Never had to worry much,
Never seen as being butch.
Always played like it'd never end;
Viewed by the boys as "just a friend".

Had the best of both worlds, too;
Had a friend, a girl who
Invited me over to play 'dollies and tea',
And loaned me her 'Raleigh', so I could ride free.

Oh what a time, a wonderful time,
When life was so simple and fun.
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Posted: Jun 2022
About this poem:
Happy memories...
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LustLuvLaughter

Toy

Play with Hearts as if a toy
Minimizing my love and devotion
I want to create, others can destroy
A pool of tears, a raging ocean

The clunkiness, you must forgive this
Excuse me a moment while I take a
I will never quit, no two week's notice
I am, after all, from thre Land of Lava and Sheep
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Posted: May 2023
About this poem:
Pardonez me. I am from Iceland. My best friend just called me. Her fiance just left her.
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toro2

Queen Searching Lost Kingdom

Queen Searching Lost Kingdom

Geranium whispers in the twilight haze,
A queen wanders under the moon's soft gaze.
Her kingdom lost, her heart in strife,
In every petal, she seeks her life.

Aster stars sprinkle the night,
Guiding her way with their radiant light.
Echoes of laughter, shadows of crowns,
In dreams of old, her hope rebounds.

Lilies pure, standing tall and fair,
Whispers of a kingdom that was once there.
Courage in heart, scepter in hand,
She journeys forth to reclaim her land.

Iris, the rainbow, blooms in her wake,
Reflecting the path that she must take.
Across the mountains, through the dales,
Her spirit strong, she never fails.

Camellia blushes in dawn's first light,
Symbol of love, burning bright.
In the heart of a queen, love knows no bounds,
Her lost kingdom, she finally found.

In the forest of forget-me-not,
She finds a land that time forgot.
The palace stands, proud and grand,
In the kingdom, where love and memories expand.

Azalea, a celebration of life anew,
In the heart of the kingdom, where love is true.
With her people, she dances with joy,
In the land that time could never destroy.

Daisies bloom in fields wide and vast,
Reminding her of a beautiful past.
Now the queen of a kingdom reborn,
In the heart of her people, she'll never be forlorn.

Roses, the symbol of eternal love,
Blessings bestowed from the heavens above.
In the heart of a rose, she finds her peace,
Queen of her kingdom, where wonders never cease.
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Posted: May 2023
About this poem:
The poem "Queen Searching Lost Kingdom" is a beautiful and deeply evocative narrative, eloquently capturing the journey of a queen in search of her lost realm. It effortlessly weaves the theme of perseverance, love, and the power of hope through its exquisite lines.

Each stanza, marked by the name of a flower, adds an extra layer of symbolism and depth. Flowers, traditionally associated with feelings and emotions, create a rich tapestry of images that underscore the queen's quest and her emotional landscape. This botanical theme contributes to an overall sense of continuity and growth, mirroring the queen's personal development throughout her journey.

The journey of the queen could be interpreted metaphorically, not just as a quest for a physical kingdom, but also for internal fulfillment or self-discovery. The triumphant tone in the end, where the queen finds her kingdom and peace in a rose, suggests the completion of a transformative journey. It is dedicated to MAHARLIKA 808.

Lastly, the use of rhyme and rhythm in the poem adds a lyrical quality, making it not only a joy to read, but also giving it a timeless, classic feel.

Given that you've said this poem was inspired by a real 'queen' you know, it's evident that she is a strong and resilient figure. This poem, in its symbolic and metaphorical language, serves as a tribute to her journey and character.
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LustLuvLaughter

???

Forgive me my Transgressions
I've certainly paid them in full
I am ever so full of questions
Like smooth silk or itchy wool
Forgive me my Transgressions
I'm a dolt. After all, I'm a guy
I am ever so full of questions
Like How, Who, When, Where, Why
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Posted: May 2023
About this poem:
OK, this is a poem at 2 AM. My kitty is running all over the place and my ribs are throbbing (2 were, accidentally, broken a little over a week ago).
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RadiantFirefly

08/16/18

** I will She'd my tears for you, I will hold on to each and every precious moment we've shared! In My Heart You will always Live!
This is not "Goodbye", Just a "See Ya Again Sometime" I will Be Strong and Carry On, So that I May carry You with Me and share your memory. You came into my life and taught me things that over the years to come, I will still learn from. Yes, You will be dearly Missed, and although, at this moment, It seems so hard to face each new day without you near, I know that where-ever you are, You're Loving Me Still! I'll cry for now, and I may cry some later, But My tears will be filled with all the joy you've once given.
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Posted: Oct 2019
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makatka

Words

You said
so many desires in us
longings.
And I believed in every word.
You said
your appearance
deep in my eyes
sunk.
I gave in to feelings.
You said
so many emotions, desires
I can not sleep at night.
I haven't slept with you
But that day has come
and everything you wrote about
run out
and my eyes remain
wide open.
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Posted: Oct 2019
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extendededdie

You never was my angel

You've hurt me like no other
Made my heart bleed inside
I thought your more than any other
But you had inside another

Crying in the middle of the night,
Trying forget you in my time
But your always in my sight
Like a living ghost in my mind

Why my love wasn’t enough for you
In your mind I know I wasn’t vital
Each day I hurt my feelings for you
Knowing you never was my angel
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Posted: Jun 2021
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extendededdie

Only if she knew

If she only knew
If she could just feel
What I feel here in my heart
She'd know it was real
Pure and true right from the start
But I'm just a man who didn't understand
What she was going through
And took me for granted and played me up
Cause love is so easy to feel
But the hardest thing to say
Only if she could just see
What I see when I close my eyes
All that I dreams I felt for her
Surely she would realize
Like a fool I waited much too long
But now she's gone away,
Maybe she'd wanted this way
Only if she knew
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Posted: Jun 2021
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mcradloff

People I've Worked With

There are so many who have come and gone through the years
Some were nice to be around, most were not
I'm super shy, so that sure doesn't help to foster a good time for me
I really wish I had gotten a job long ago where it was just me, myself, and I
But still I have the memories of these people, and that is something
The guy from Hardee's went golfing with me in 1988
The girl from Hardee's went out with me on a date
The girl from d*ck's got me, thank god she wasn't late
The teacher from Cassville made me a meal
The guy from Peru at the cheese plant in Belmont talked about potatoes with zeal
The young man from Fiji at the freezer plant in East Dubuque like my music a lot
The guy from South America at the muffler shop in Mineral Point was nice
The women at Chestnut in Galena were so pretty they would melt January ice
I could talk about the rest who weren't so well
But for now all I can say is...
They can just go to HELL!
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Posted: Nov 2019
About this poem:
My coworkers really suck, or maybe it's just me that just doesn't like all this human interaction crap!
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