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honeybear3000

As Darkness Falls.......

all the signs have passed not a trace ,nothing but a empty space ,like a fighter with broken hands and only them left to give ,a burned out soul waiting to be shoveled in!, the gray clouds overhead materialize in his eyes from within crawling on the cold shallow path that's bound to give in
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Posted: Mar 2017
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sophiasummer

The writers scene

drifting
blocked

what unlocked

permission
submission

flicking flavour
stealing full stops
a creeping
command
of
sentences

that
call

"Give me the bright time"
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Posted: Apr 2017
About this poem:
Good feel.
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Kamitin

Maestro's Masterpiece

What my wanderer soul is searching for
Never to realize the Maestro's slather core

Flights of morning ascend
Perhaps coming to pit end
Song of cricket's auger dark's bend
Sketchpad filled with rainbow
Colors hugging in a row
Twinkling Eyes (stars) too gather...up & above
Aqua-nimals hide deep to Letup!

It's only when i consent
He rejoices my self-content
Revealing his rarest artisanship
Just to gratify our friendship

Till the time i become numb and awed
Keep walking the never ending road !!
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Posted: Nov 2017
About this poem:
Sitting by the Lake in Nepal, motionless witnessing the setting Sun ...
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BobbyC1348

CUTE RED DRESS

Sitting alone on her back porch swing,
Thinking of time going by,
Takes her mind on a magic carpet ride,
Closes her eyes and starts to cry,

She knows her life's not what it's meant to be,
Her teardrops puddle on the floor,
To be one of Them in a Cute Red Dress,
She cries till she cries no more,

Day becomes night as she dries her tears,
A shining bright Angel appears from the dark,
This vision quiets all her fears,
Giving her the strength to carry on,

Suddenly the wheels fall from her chair,
She rises uncertainly on broken feet,
A miracle's rained down on her shattered life,
A miracle that's made her life complete,

She opens her eyes to a bright new day,
No one will ever believe it's true,
She prances so joyously in her new sun,
She knows now what she must do,

Off she goes! in her cute red dress,
Smiling at THEM as she holds her head so high,
The Angel lifts her in it's mighty arms,
And off away they fly
On High
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Posted: Apr 2018
About this poem:
At times we all need a miracle to pull us through, lift us up, and keep us going. And sometimes just the vision of a miracle can lift our hearts.

Was this merely a vision?
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DoSoLonging

rosese

Roses are love any flower is more than grey or white. of any type lips and all sorts of greenery. moss lays any type is beauty to the bee. as long as I rose and leave the stem roots find your beautful
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Posted: Nov 2018
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Unknown

"To have or to have not"

“ To have or to have not”
That is the Question

Man wants what they cannot have ~

And I want you!

Your smiling eyes within their pools of love

Your upturned breasts

Your tossing hips

You with your red tasty lips

Make the day go by

I want your smile

Your face of laughter

It’s what I’m after

Please say you have feelings

For me too!

Romantic Poet
JimEee
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Posted: Dec 2018
About this poem:
Yearning for
the impossible dream
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surrender00

every step i take

everystep i take everymove i make

every single day every nite i prayer
i will care about you

cause i can i like that

your friend mark morris

everystep i take everymove i make

every single day every nite i prayer
i will care about you

cause i can i like that
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Posted: Feb 29
About this poem:
what can i say i'm superior tell me if you agree
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surrender00

in my dreams

hold this close your mind and embed it to your heart cause your the best
and you can thats fantastic this about you

stay forever who you are forever ever in my dreams cause your worth it

sway gently in the breeze forever in my dreams because your perfect

in my dreams you were perfect

over

its the real connection listen to and understand that i do care about you your happiness your feelings and your life cause your a women and important



stay forever who you are cause i care

your friend mark

e-mail me baronsamadi00@mail.com
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Posted: Feb 29
About this poem:
it kinda makes me nervous friend
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surrender00

even when your gone carry on

this song goes out t each and everyone of you

your beautiful

g'day australia

this song is just for you in me feel good cause your intresting and i care about you
and everything you do your important lets get together forever you and me your beautiful and always will be work for me and rule the world cause you can and i like that



from the rubble of your love

e-mail me baronsamadi00@mail.com

your friend best friend

mark morris
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Posted: Feb 29
About this poem:
your fantastic
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Unknown

Gossip

The dark clouds gathered before thunder

Oh I wish (if only) the rain would deliberately rain down and touch carefully her palm

The most important thing is I felt her in my veins

The memories of her flow steadily

They are like the fire that makes my heart beat

I hide grief and sadness and I managed to hide them well

I ignore desires, even if they are present

And bitterness grows together with the longing

Others whisper to see the poison work its duty and prevent love from blossoming

And the gossips increase to the tune of lies

The arrogant seductresses fill in with their quire

How to lower grievance / sadness of the world on an absent random girl

I feel joy for she came back and I feel annoyance for the compulsion of holding her back

On the night of fire, the heat leaves her burning, and she covers up her grief

I am a man who is being strong, breaking my tears into small pieces

I shy away from the comfort of a young gazelle who already took place in my heart

and left traces on my cheeks as a witness over it
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Posted: Dec 2020
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