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cafetwo2010

'Farewell Cafe'

Farewell Cafe under
seagull skys
With your umbrella
tables, and boardwalk
fries
Farewell to the girl
with sand in her toes
To beachballs and cokes
and sunburn nose
Farewell Cafe to your
neon lights flashing
electric colors on
boardwalk nights
Farewell Cafe to your
menu of love for mine
was taken..to angels
above~
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
Thought I'd throw in one with a twist..
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Unknown

A loving pain ...

She look into his eyes and knew he hurt, by the way he held his head away from crowd...
She saw someone approach him and the smile was there, as if by magic it appeared...

She knew everyone thought all was well, when in reality he was living in hell...
He stretched out his hand to take a drink, and standing so close her eyes on the glass she saw his fingers clink...

It hurt her heart, She felt his pain...
Knowing what it feels like to love someone, who may never feel the same...
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
This poem is giving an idea what it feels like to love someone so much and knowing they are in love with someone else...
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grizzlyRu

even evensong ( reminds me of her)

you never walked..
twas more
the curve of the earth
found a mooring
in the shape of your foot

you never painted..
twas more
you found the depth
of unwitting testimony
and magic
bled through the canvas

you never sang..
twas more a distillation
of vibrated yearning
and what emerged
saluted a starved ear

you never chased
numerical truth..
twas more
the starling cloud of value
settling
on the branch of your logic

you never laughed..
twas more the agents of joy
constructing
permanent dwellings
beneath your eyes

you never swam
the springs tide..
twas more
the sea inhaled
and the normal laws of physics
let you pass

you never died woman..
twas more
every smile, ever formed
took flight

forever
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Posted: May 2017
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Aceguy111

The Opposites.

be it couples , be it elements ,
be it fire , be it water .
Always there is a mystery to them ,
the opposites.
their existence baffled many ,
baffled philosophy , baffled science .
some exist in conflict , some in harmony ,
the opposites.
ying yang , positive and negative ,
good and evil , light and dark .
balancing one another since the dawn of eons ,
the opposites.
in the origin with the big bang , in the every existing atom ,
in the age of the cave man , in the age of the modern man.
they were with the dawn of the universe and will be there till it ends ,
the opposites.
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Posted: Mar 2021
About this poem:
this is my amateur poetry on opposites . It began as a describing of couples who are opposites but completely transformed into a discription of opposites in their essence .
tell me what you think about it .
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byfaith

lovers dream.

Singles not connected in anyway, login here from day to day. Love they seek by day, happiness by nite; they pray. But could this yet be, an elusive distant dream? Each new day sees, new-faces coming on stream. Profiles they are building, hopes are all they have. Yet months and years passing, most remain for love- starved. Longing for that tender kiss, passions long unfelt and gone. Nightly reminiscence, of what they missed, wondering whether to go on. But dream on my brother and sister you dream too. 'connecting-singles' is like no other, dreams here do come through!
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
this poem is about internet dating. just want to get in to the mind of the average user. also put a smile on someone's face.
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iluvisis1

An Unexpected Wish

I'm looking for you I think- I wish-
wondering why must I be alone?
I've much to share, and give and heck,
don't want to be an old crone!
Laughing, smiling, hugging- yes
nothing better to do this day!
Will you share some time with me...
there's much to do in many ways.
I'd love a partner to
whittle away time
to comfort, console to
help with a rhyme.
Let's share a sunset,feed the ducks,
watch tv or feed our face,
Stand or sit or "heeheehee"
Play or talk in yours-my space?
Inside , outside, upside down.....
Have a picnic, go to town?
Live, and like, and laugh together
With no thought to whats the weather.
As I did when all these words...
tumbled out quite absurd.
The thought remained regardless
of rhyme
I'd love someone to share my time.
Are you out there...
Am I just dreaming
Just like these words effortlessly
streaming.
Am I ...are you looking too ?
I hope that I can find you.
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Posted: Sep 2010
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hawqeye

Salvation

Salvation

Sweet Jesus I owe everything to you and to you alone,
You have shown me my home,you are my anchor stone,
You have saved me always when stormy winds have blown,
You have always been my rock,the truest friend I've known,
So why do you think me worthy as a seed you have sown
What can I ever do to earn all the love you've shown .

Ch:
Let me know sweet Jesus, let me know beyond my days
Let me know my savior,when I bow down to you in praise,
When my time here is drawing short and coming to a close,
As they carry me away after leading the life I chose,
I pray that I will leave not sorrow for those that I love,
But instead to know the joy that waits for us above.

I am not a wealthy man but I am very rich by far,
When I walk my journey you're my guiding star
And you know that I am honest in all the things I do,
I have never born false witness,I only say what's true,
You have strengthened my soul before I even knew
Of life's losses with your love to see me through.

You have always had your hand placed within my soul,
You have shown me your light that has made me whole,
I have never known this love that comes from your grace,
Nor have I known compassion that shines from your face,
For I am still a sinner and you are the son of God
I can only meet you after I've slept beneath the sod.
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
Note: I could not get to sleep after attending a gospel show in our sister church.The entertainment was from my home town and they were great.Anyway,I had 2 cups of coffee for brunch earlier.Perhaps both kept me awake.The melody started in my head followed by the first line of the chorus,then I had to get up and this is the result.Other than a couple typos,I did not change one syllable.
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jomalyn

...selfless love...

to the man i love

If I die, please don't cry..
Pray for me and just say good bye..

As i go, want to let you know
I was happy and love you soo.

Don't be sad instead be glad
Because from now on I will be with father God..

Forgetting me would be better,
So you can find a happy ever after.

I'm going now with a happy face
But I will never forget you're sweet embrace..

Wipe those tears and keep the smile,
I want you to be happy as I say good bye..
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Life is uncertain so I wrote this poem for him..
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honeybear3000

I Eat Peaches

I eat peaches for breakfast one before brunch an 3 before dinner an 4 before lunch I eat peaches on my way to school on the dive and into the pool people call me a peach eating fool I eat peaches here I eat peaches there I think there's peaches coming out of my ears an now there's peach juice dripping on my chair I do care ill eat peaches any were cos I eat peaches
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Posted: Apr 2015
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wayne34

the 10 word challenge

Tainted
Glittering
Fragrant
Tasteless
Cross
Grave
Mortal
Lost
Temptress
Sin
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
All words have to be used only once any style poem my friends good writing
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