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Unknown

Harsh Reality

And there he sits.
No entry allowed.
He is stone, no chips.
Don't cross that line.
You'll not find anything
it's closed and barren.

How he came to be
I don't know.
But the stillness it affects me so.
I stiffen at the thought of his touch.
I feel the coldness, the dark it evades
me.

Go away............
Go away, don't come near
you will destroy me
I fear.

He has drifted from me now.
Many years have passed
No longer the hold, no longer is it cast.
I see sadness and regret but it is too late.
He closes his eyes and before me is gone.
But I will remember that statue,
that stone, the coldness and the dark,
for that was a real man who now keeps
his grave.
Where silent sorrow sleeps forever night.
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Posted: Nov 2010
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ironman

Valentines Day Love and Kisses

It is in the air
The birds are chirping
The bees are sing
and the mocking birds are humming
Boy meets girl
and love strikes them
It is the best of times
and it can be the worst of times
Either way
It is another day
I enjoy watching couples walking by
holding hands and whispering sweet nothings
being positive and kissing and hugging
all positive wonderful and relaxing
Enjoy your mate for now is the time
love on the horizon
the clear sunset
hugging and kissing
Valentine day love and kisses
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Love is a wonderful emotion
valentines day has magic
lets all connect
be happy and fancy free
love to all
happy valentines day
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cometomeangle

just one look

you old doorway you let me in time ,and time again
looking back down the hallway
Ill never walk your floors again.
my darlin I hear you crying
Im going now.
this house held so many things specail
wish things had worked out

just one look
and Ill go
just one image
to let me know
that I had love
the real kind this time
just one look
for my heart ,and my mind

I cant keep from regretting
what Ive done
was it fallen in love with you
or never coming back
I havent made up my mind
They say everything happens for a reason
but will love ever find my life
hope all I got to bind
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Posted: Jul 2011
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Unknown

heartbeat

My heartbeat for a different reason it could beat because of the change of the season it could beat with the touch of your hand or it could beat because god gave me a second chance its funny how life can change my heartbeat in a different pace when I gave birth to my twin sons you should have seen my face I know my heart beat fast and sometimes even slow I wonder if the color of my heart is the color of the rainbow just remember your heart have the answer and it beat with a flow it can say yes or no
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Posted: Sep 2011
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U have the last say so
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cometomeangle

wake up darlin

wake up darlin
I something to tell you
something I need say
I dreamed I passed from this world
And wanted to let you
I love you
.
Lives end everyday
Precious people sometimes go away
and I wanted to make sure you know
Darlin.Angel,Loving,and Woman
I love you
.
Now I can close my eyes
and rest
That the one I love best
knows how I feel about you
I know I may look like fool
crazy ,or not I did what I have to do
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Posted: Sep 2010
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honeybear3000

The Final Hour

On a notion of fear the end of the line is near opening of the gates of hell on a starless night for let it be written, when the clock strikes 12 the reaper well ring the bell ,one final spin the river of poisons cease to exists, the windows close with windless tides the final hour well arrive .
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Posted: Apr 2015
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honeybear3000

Take My Hand ......

I here your voice like a decent wind echoing across the sky but there is doubt that breaks it down like a shattered dream with colors that change just take my hand ill show you the way I well move you heat in a deferent pace just take my hand an what you see lost well fall into place together we well conquer the entire space an with theses hands I well lift you up to the highest winds an against the burning day light the hours well never end
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Posted: Apr 2015
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honeybear3000

Enter At Your Own Risk ......

for whom dears to enter the masters house with out a key, shadows well fall upon who dears to take from the masters house, luck well not be on your side for the phenomenon of truth well become lies, the celling of this house is under the skies of the watchful eyes the smell of defeat is not at your side taking my gifts well be your curse! the building blocks for witch I speak are only mine an mind to keep !
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
the moral of the story here is hand off what is not yours .
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StarMap

Harvest

The field to plow is the life now, The seeds sown is the love grown, The harvest Eternal in Love, A Truth in Heaven Shown
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Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
A Truth Known
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decentprats

The Failure of my Love

I have been crying from the whole NiGhT
now the sun is shining in my street lane,
I still have a feeling that u MiGhT
call and pull me out of this immense pain

The life has always been so CrUel
and the people are very selfish
I desperately need your love as my FuEl
so that i can get establish

Please do not go AwAy
at least tell me what i have done
give me one last chance to SaY
that you are the only one

I wish that i was a BoOmErAnG
that way i would have come back
to my thrower’s HaNd
who has thrown me away because of her love lack

Now I am all AlOnE
and everything seems to be quite dark
I have been left on my OwN
by my lover, who on my heart made a deep mark.

Someone told me that this gloominess will FaDe
I am just lost in my dream land
I myself MaDe
I don’t need any magic wand
to save me from this cutting BlaDe
What I require is a helping hand
to take me inside the love ShAdE...


by prateek
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Posted: Sep 2012
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