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honeybear3000

The Final Hour

On a notion of fear the end of the line is near opening of the gates of hell on a starless night for let it be written, when the clock strikes 12 the reaper well ring the bell ,one final spin the river of poisons cease to exists, the windows close with windless tides the final hour well arrive .
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Posted: Apr 2015
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english57

Thank you, Lord

Thank you Lord for saving me
You took our sin and set us free.
O Lord of heaven we pledge to be
Your humble servants faithfully
And God in glory we will see.
You'll bring us safe to be with Thee.

From day to day within our life
We praise Your name within our strife
With open hearts to let You in
You've freed our souls from all our sin.
Dear Lord of heaven so graciously
Your children yearn so needfully.

When darkness falls and perils near
Your Spirit comforts us held dear.
Bolster our hearts with Your sweet love
And guide us to Your heaven above.
Perfect Redeemer, through Your Son
Help us to fight till war is won.

With You in heaven we'll take our place
And worship round Your holy face
No more to sin or worries raise
Our souls in glory bring You praise.
We herald Your blessing, for at last
Our earthly journey is now past.

Anthony Ward 2014
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
This is a hymn I wrote in the last few weeks. The tune is Melita or "Eternal Father, strong to save..."

You are free to sing it and use it but it is copyright to me. If you use it then please tell me and if you have any comments I would love to hear them
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jomalyn

...selfless love...

to the man i love

If I die, please don't cry..
Pray for me and just say good bye..

As i go, want to let you know
I was happy and love you soo.

Don't be sad instead be glad
Because from now on I will be with father God..

Forgetting me would be better,
So you can find a happy ever after.

I'm going now with a happy face
But I will never forget you're sweet embrace..

Wipe those tears and keep the smile,
I want you to be happy as I say good bye..
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Life is uncertain so I wrote this poem for him..
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wayne34

the 10 word challenge

Tainted
Glittering
Fragrant
Tasteless
Cross
Grave
Mortal
Lost
Temptress
Sin
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
All words have to be used only once any style poem my friends good writing
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kingthepoet

facebook status

I am like a face book status
Updated by God
You can click "like" on me
Hate me or ignor me
Only the updater above can delete me
You can not delet what you have not updated

Even if you think I'm lame or outdated
Send me your sweet bitter and better comments
I'm a status of vilage children
Singing and dancing after the rain.
I'm a status of township children
Singing and dancing on top of courigated iron
Poverty branded with banded dream
Yet still hoping for a better tomorrow without sorrow
I revive hope lost deep on liquer in the shebins
Where yesterday dreamers tell tales
Of what they used to be

I am galvanised with freedom of expression
I am a sweating passion of African fesion
My ticket to a gig of life given by God is with me
I am a township cheff marinating chicken
With dust spices feeding the leaders of tomorrow

I am a house builder without a house
I am a motor mechanic without a car
I am a hustler in the streets selling dreams of Jamaica
"Brotherman one love"
I am a status of my own
The child of Africa given birth by Africans
I am the status of my own happiness
I dance to the rythm of African songs
I am a status, updated by God.
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
This poem is about 'n African who is proud of being 'n African
Yet also understands tha he is also what he is because of God, he sings praise for what he is, he admire the beaauty of Africa with all the poverty. This poem is about me and I wrote it when I discovered how lucky I was that God has updated me. The African.........
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Unknown

A loving pain ...

She look into his eyes and knew he hurt, by the way he held his head away from crowd...
She saw someone approach him and the smile was there, as if by magic it appeared...

She knew everyone thought all was well, when in reality he was living in hell...
He stretched out his hand to take a drink, and standing so close her eyes on the glass she saw his fingers clink...

It hurt her heart, She felt his pain...
Knowing what it feels like to love someone, who may never feel the same...
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
This poem is giving an idea what it feels like to love someone so much and knowing they are in love with someone else...
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wayne34

smile

:-) and the world smiles with you
Frown and they will pass you by
Say hallo and a hi and smile goes a long way
Be miserable they don't want to know

Alone you will be
Not a sole will want you
Cry and cry alone you will be
Sad and depressed

Your days long and dark
Sadness you dwell upoun
Emptieness
In a rut you become

Dependant on depresants you becum
So briten your day do not dwell
Get out of bed
Smile its a new day
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Posted: Nov 2013
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StarMap

Harvest

The field to plow is the life now, The seeds sown is the love grown, The harvest Eternal in Love, A Truth in Heaven Shown
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Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
A Truth Known
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Unknown

Not missing you

Who is not missing you
The one that you make love to
the one that you let can carress your neck
and kiss your shoulders
Watch you grow older
Placing a candle on your cake
who can take a moment of your time
schedule a meeting place and find you waiting there with a smile
Who gets to compliment your style
Who is sharing your runway of life
Who will call you his wife
Who makes up excuses to steal away from family and friends
just for more time to spead with you alone
who can call you his own
Who is not missing you
like I Do

RizzyBlack
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Posted: Jul 2013
About this poem:
Cape Town
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decentprats

The Failure of my Love

I have been crying from the whole NiGhT
now the sun is shining in my street lane,
I still have a feeling that u MiGhT
call and pull me out of this immense pain

The life has always been so CrUel
and the people are very selfish
I desperately need your love as my FuEl
so that i can get establish

Please do not go AwAy
at least tell me what i have done
give me one last chance to SaY
that you are the only one

I wish that i was a BoOmErAnG
that way i would have come back
to my thrower’s HaNd
who has thrown me away because of her love lack

Now I am all AlOnE
and everything seems to be quite dark
I have been left on my OwN
by my lover, who on my heart made a deep mark.

Someone told me that this gloominess will FaDe
I am just lost in my dream land
I myself MaDe
I don’t need any magic wand
to save me from this cutting BlaDe
What I require is a helping hand
to take me inside the love ShAdE...


by prateek
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Posted: Sep 2012
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