steve1223 Most Commented Poems

Poem	Order by Most Viewed	Order by Most Commented	Order by Most Liked	Created	Commented	Viewed
View From The Top Sitting on the mountain looking down The world spread out before me Madly running all around Like ants here and there they scurry Do they even k...	874	6	0	Oct 2014	Dec 2014	Apr 30
The Traveller Backwards and forwards through time he travels Each day much like the other He continues to seek but does not discover This burden is so hard to...	922	5	0	Nov 2014	Dec 2014	May 3
The End What if God finally gave up on us ... what if he/she decided the disease ran too deep ... interesting thought ... this is not meant to upset anyone's...	920	5	0	Nov 2014	Nov 2014	May 3
I Am Quite Normal A bit of humour...	778	5	0	Oct 2014	Nov 2014	Apr 24
Pearl Necklace Slowly life leaves her Not willingly Fighting For every breath As she drops to the ground The strand breaks And the pearls cascade Around h...	752	5	1	Nov 2017	Oct 2022	May 3
Jack & Jill A different take...	508	5	0	Nov 2013	Nov 2013	May 3
This Is The Pits How do I hide what I have done On the floor she’s laying dead Not that I regret killing her Losing my freedom is what I dread Can’t say that it...	461	5	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	May 2
Looking Back Life was so much different then When I was young and free No cares or worries to bother me As a merchant marine I went to sea Around the world s...	490	5	0	Sep 2013	Sep 2013	Apr 25

Nothing to Say Mystery woman came into my life Always be gentle, always be kind Rivers of joy flow into my soul Ice has melted this heart not cold Ever nearer yo...	606	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	Apr 30
What is Love Sometimes we ask in the wrong places...	364	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 8
Black Dog I think most people have the Black Dog of depression visit them sometime during their life...	371	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	May 2
Sky Observation while driving to work today...	406	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 22
A True Story I started writing this quite a while back. It is a true story with names changed. I came across this when I had my counselling practice. I was working...	383	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 23
Centennial Park (I & II) Fooling No-one You who come to Centennial Park To visit your dead and buried You weep and moan over tombstone so proud Is it because you...	371	5	0	Jul 2011	Aug 2011	May 3
The Tale of the Old Man (Part IV) The next year I worked so hard That time just flew on past Things that been let go too long Like paint upon the walls Nineteen fifty two rolled...	410	5	0	Jul 2011	Sep 2011	May 1
Ancient of Days I was talking to an elderly Gent (in his 90's) and he told me that every night he stands under the stars and praises the 'Ancient of Days'...	829	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	May 3
What Would Jesus Find The other day a friend placed a challenge in front of me...what would Jesus find if He was to walk the streets of Adelaide today...both good and bad.....	410	5	0	Jul 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 17
These Voices Pray you never hear these voices...	882	5	0	Jun 2011	Jun 2011	Apr 29
Dream me Dreams Dream me Dreams...	907	5	0	Jun 2011	Jul 2011	Apr 27
Unborn's Lament Many years ago a close friend was in this predicament...she swears that the child talked to her in her sleep...it was brewing in my mind for a while a...	1,022	5	0	Jul 2011	Aug 2011	May 1
Seeking Love Love is such a common commodity Yet as priceless as the rarest jewel Songs are sung and poems are written Lovers seek for it everywhere And there...	409	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	Apr 25

In the Heat of the Night In the heat of the night When love blossoms Two souls meet as one When hot breaths mingle And lips so gently touch Skin to skin bodies touch Wit...	412	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	Apr 27
Ode to Dishpan Hands While doing dishes my beautiful girlfriend made a comment about dishpan hands followed by 'now I'll probably see ode to dishpan hands turn up in one o...	495	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	May 1
Raincoat Why you dirty minded people, I bet you thought something else. A poet has to make a living somehow LOL...	397	5	0	Aug 2011	Sep 2011	May 3
The Lost Boy's Club I was told that this club exists in a dingy back street in a capital city near you. You will find it if you seek hard enough. When you find it let me...	388	5	0	Sep 2011	Sep 2011	Apr 29
Goblins Just a note here .... the Orcs are not much better ... stick with buying from the Elven folk...	404	5	0	Sep 2011	Sep 2011	May 1
Lady From The Country In the country lives a Lady Heart of gold has she Likes to live life so simple Surrounded by friends and family Doesn't like life of drama Believ...	415	5	0	Sep 2011	Sep 2011	Apr 27
Frogs Lament Had to give the frogs right of reply...	714	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	Apr 28
The Beginning Just wanted to try something totally different. We are not doing a good job as caretakers....	461	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	May 3
Journey's End We all have our own road to travel and the end is the same destination for all of us....	347	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	Apr 30
The Gentle Voice A gentle voice within my soul It whispers quietly You are my child, my loved one In you I am well pleased How blessed is this voice to hear And...	399	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	May 4

For Someone Special Your smile that warms this heart within A rebirth of hopes for future Feelings lost and long forgotten Brought out by knowing you So here I write...	387	5	0	Aug 2011	Aug 2011	May 2
One Fair Knight Long Ago Back in history, in days of old Twas then that knights were very bold And the ladies were covered in gold It was in that time there lived a bold...	425	5	0	Feb 2013	Mar 2013	Apr 27
I Await I have looked, and looked quite deeply I am empty, there is nothing inside me Yet out there, somewhere, I can hear it It is like a voice in the air...	450	5	0	Apr 2013	Apr 2013	Apr 30
Through Yonder Darkly Wanders I thought that I would try a different way of writing to how I normally write ... this is not based on any reality and is purely fiction....	566	5	0	Aug 2012	Aug 2012	May 2
Humorous Sonnet You wish for me to write a sonnet Words of love dripping from t...	2,194	5	0	Oct 2012	Oct 2012	13 hrs ago
RMS Titanic Official statistics Total on board: 2,228 Total passengers: 1,343 Total crew: 885 Total saved: 705 Total drowned: 1,523 iv Analysis of those sa...	595	5	0	Oct 2012	Mar 2013	Apr 28
How Do You Say Goodbye I walk amongst the twilight shadows I want to cry, but I cannot I want to howl and let my emotions loose But they are tightly encapsulated within m...	576	5	0	Jun 2013	Jun 2013	May 3
Do We Care? Sometimes you have to shout out your defiance...	478	5	0	Aug 2013	Aug 2013	24 hrs ago
Tears Of My Sorrow Thought I would try something different...	423	5	0	Aug 2013	Aug 2013	Apr 7

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