Centennial Park (I & II)

Fooling No-one





You who come to Centennial Park
To visit your dead and buried
You weep and moan over tombstone so proud
Is it because you're remembering

You spend your thousands on monuments grand
And strut around in pretence
See how much I cared for them
This shrine I built according

And yet when lived your loved one
You abused and neglected
Left too late to make amends
Your conscience to be salving

So shed your tears and beat your breast
And show the world you're mourning
Deep inside you know I know
You're really fooling no-one





Centennial Park Revisited


Humble stone at head does stand
And simple is inscription
Beloved father and husband of
And there followed descriptions

This humble grave so loving kept
By this woman and her children
One could see by a single glance
That this was a happy family

A single tear slid down my cheek
The cynic was abated
Not all is lost, there is hope yet
That love might somehow triumph
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Posted: Jul 2011

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marikia
This is so true. Better take care and love each other while we are alive, cause pompous memorials built for the dead can never bring them to life or save guilty conscience, or serve any other absurd purpose, let alone fooling others. We should be craving pardon instead for the wrong done, for 'a good conscience is a continual feast' as the saying goes. Thank you for sharing. handshake
steve1223
Have added part 2
Katfight
My grandmother is buried at Centennial Park. It is a beautiful place to go to remember a beautiful woman. Nice write, it conjured up memories (of good) for me.
steve1223
I'm glad it brought back nice memories. My mother is buried there too. It is a nice place.bouquet
marikia
"The cynic was abated" in you at the sight of a humble grave lovingly kept by the happy family gathered around, and the scene was so awesome in its modesty and sincerity that you, a stranger, were deeply moved. Genuine grief keeps to itself, it is not a showcase.

I came across "A Requiem" by Elizabeth Jennings and thought it was in line with the mood of your poem. Please enjoy.


It is the ritual not the fact
That brings a held emotion to
Its breaking-point. This man I knew
Only a little, by his death
Shows me a love I thought I lacked
And all the stirrings underneath.

It is the calm, the solemn thing,
Not the distracted mourner’s cry
Or the cold place where dead things lie,
That teaches me I cannot claim
To stand aside. These tears which sting –
Are they from sorrow or from shame?
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