This is so true. Better take care and love each other while we are alive, cause pompous memorials built for the dead can never bring them to life or save guilty conscience, or serve any other absurd purpose, let alone fooling others. We should be craving pardon instead for the wrong done, for 'a good conscience is a continual feast' as the saying goes. Thank you for sharing.
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 2, 2011
Have added part 2
KatfightAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 2, 2011
My grandmother is buried at Centennial Park. It is a beautiful place to go to remember a beautiful woman. Nice write, it conjured up memories (of good) for me.
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 2, 2011
I'm glad it brought back nice memories. My mother is buried there too. It is a nice place.
"The cynic was abated" in you at the sight of a humble grave lovingly kept by the happy family gathered around, and the scene was so awesome in its modesty and sincerity that you, a stranger, were deeply moved. Genuine grief keeps to itself, it is not a showcase.
I came across "A Requiem" by Elizabeth Jennings and thought it was in line with the mood of your poem. Please enjoy.
It is the ritual not the fact That brings a held emotion to Its breaking-point. This man I knew Only a little, by his death Shows me a love I thought I lacked And all the stirrings underneath.
It is the calm, the solemn thing, Not the distracted mourner’s cry Or the cold place where dead things lie, That teaches me I cannot claim To stand aside. These tears which sting – Are they from sorrow or from shame?
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I came across "A Requiem" by Elizabeth Jennings and thought it was in line with the mood of your poem. Please enjoy.
It is the ritual not the fact
That brings a held emotion to
Its breaking-point. This man I knew
Only a little, by his death
Shows me a love I thought I lacked
And all the stirrings underneath.
It is the calm, the solemn thing,
Not the distracted mourner’s cry
Or the cold place where dead things lie,
That teaches me I cannot claim
To stand aside. These tears which sting –
Are they from sorrow or from shame?