When I kiss you...

When I kiss you, a whole ocean runs through my veins
Flowers bloom in my body, like a garden
And you fertilize me and prune me, I’m happy
And a nightingale undresses over my tongue
And between its tiny wings we love each other without modesty
When you kiss me, you give my mouth a Nobel prize
When I kiss you, you open and close like the wing of a butterfly
And your saliva baptizes my illusion
And you bite my reason up to the core
And a moan undresses and comes from your voice
I follow its steps and my heart folds
When you kiss me all the stars light up in the dawn
And a nightingale undresses over my tongue
And between its tiny wings we love each other without modesty
When you kiss me, you give my mouth a Nobel prize
When I kiss you, the moon trembles over the river and overflows





This is one of the most beautiful songs I have heard in my life... This is poetry turned into a song... heart beating heart beating heart beating

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Very nice Sharing. thumbs up
I like it good song. angel bouquet peace
Glad you liked it... I posted it mostly because I wanted it to be on my profile and because I wanted to share the wonderful and rich art our latin "poets" have gifted us... There are so many breath taking songs in spanish, with such a level of deepness in their lyrics... Thank you for commenting and have a wonderful day/night... bouquet
Que Benito Melody! love

Who wrote it?

The Spanish poet Garcia Lorca also had inspired some singers/songwriters
An example: Pequeño Vals Vienes (take this waltz, sung by Leonard Cohen).

I also like Pablo Neruda (Chilie) and Gabriel Garcia Marqués (Columbia).
We definitely need more of those ! smitten
Sweet Dani, I call it poetry, because that's what it is... Musical poetry... Juan Luis Guerra is a dominican composer, singer, musician... He has created a lot of beautiful songs... All of them with meaning... Not like the lame and dumb lyrics we are used to hear, these times... All of Juan Luis Guerra´s lyrics leave a message, whether it's a funny-cute love song or a song to make you think... I have to confess I was speechless, the first time I heard this song, because Juan Luis was and has always been known mostly for his merengue songs... I immediately fell in love with it... And I totally agree with you...We really need more of these... But at the same time, these masterpieces being so unique and rare is what makes them so special... I am glad that you liked it and I hope you are safe and well, sweet soul... bouquet hug
Hey Melody, thanks for the info.

Why don't you post more of his poetry/songs?
You could post some in the poets corner?

Also on my last blog about music, if you so wish?

hug bouquet
I'll never know. banana
I will, Dani... hug bouquet
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