Adorable duplicity
A new creation. What do you think about it?Choice of words, meaning etc...
Is everything clear, or maybe some parts too difficult to understand?
Does the headline fit good to it?
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Adorable duplicity
Your smiles, and laughs, and words so sweet
Your eyes, and body, irresistable charme
You got so many wonderful sides, but none is true
You make bees buzz and birds start to tweet
Like you’re not able to commit any harm
But anyone around is poisoned, all just by you
You can’t deny
You were approaching me
You have prepared and set the track
Arming them with bitter lies
And forced them to aim thoughtless at me
Now, while I am drawing flak,
Giving it thousands of tries
To banish false blame and make them see
That you are not
As you’re supposed to be
Your sharp tongue, stabbing my soul
Hear its dark sighing sound
Causing my heart to bleed
An emptyness, ghastly to foal
See my drops falling down
Why did you set them free?
I want you... to be
As you pretended to me
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© by me ;P
Comments (9)
See my drops falling down
Why did you set them free
halo mr.poet,,why dont you bring your poem to the poetry corner,,,it nice and well written,nice words used,,not bad,keep writting and hope to see you at the poetry corner
A local student in his interminable search came in a front row
I talked with him off the subject and couldn't let him go
Soon I rushed off without letting him know
Now still feel guilty causing him trouble
But however it may be just pass by and say hello
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Hm, I am very rarely on the forum. When I am in the right mood for being creative, then usually some ideas pop up on my mind and I have to write it down at once - at least take some notes. Otherwise, I would forget it few minutes after again.
Got a really bad working memory...
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Thank you. But actually it shouldn't be 'nice'. hehe
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"Soon I rushed off without letting him know"
Hmm... if you are, who I'm thinkin of, then I still owe you a short story?!?