Happy Family. Short true-dramatized story.

My name is Leila, I am 12 years old. I have a good friend name Deron, which only I can see. i thought he was like some others who would just stare at me. Deron is different. He talks.

First I thought I was only imagining it. Then he started telling me stories which then happen to be true. It can be something that has happened or would happened.

At first I did not pay attention to him. Later I did. And now I even ask what will happen. Sometimes he answers, sometimes he does not. Like now when I asked him what happened between my parents. Why has they slept in a different room? Why hasn't they talked to each other? Deron did not want to answer. He said it's adult's stuff. I said it's also mine, because they are my parents. So Deron asked me to ask them my self. But my dad got mad when I did. He slapped me till I fell off the stair. And now I become Deron, which no one can see. But I'm happy now. Because I, now, can see everything. And I can tell my mom stories the way Deron did. I told her why dad spent more time outside instead of with her.

So one day my mom jumped off the stair because she wanted to be with me. Only then I know, Deron was my brother whom my dad hit till death because Deron yelled at dad when dad hit mom.

Now we are a happy family. Me, mom, and my brother. Nothing can separate us now, the way dad did.

Kintamani, July 20th, 2012
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Comments (10)

is that your lifes story , or someone else ? wave
Virgo, does it matter? True events are the biggest inspiration for writers, be it their own or others. And thank you for the red roses you keep sending, I have a story about red roses. Stop by at my poetry corner wink
cool dear sweet honest and nice lady , you make me smile , cheering teddybear
Hey, cool, nice short story! wave wine handshake
Elmo! Haven't seen you around lately. Busy?
guess they never want their father to join emsad flower
Nope! Their world now is only for good people, those who love each other :) thanks for stopping by, Rox :)
Very very nice!

I am glad you are my friend.
Ed! Thank you for the compliment. But does that mean you're not happy to be my friend if I do not write? crying
why is a child posting on an adult website?
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A tiger in a cat's body.

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