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Sep 28, 2007 4:30 PM CST Broken paradise
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Flames jump and dance
as would-be wits wield words
like clubs all whirling overhead
and the sycophants go oooh
and the gallery goes aaaah
first blood to him, oh no,
to me, to you, who's keeping count?
who's counting coup
in this stupid battle?
There is no right
when wrong is so
widespread that people
dig their graves
to leave their mark before
they're banned;
who cares about these strangers?
Two months ago they were the pack
and now they are the 'victim'
cycle round and rally up the flagpoles
let's not miss the dirt
the nasty fun, the insults that make
a hell for some of us who come
to play, to write, to read,
to meet and greet and maybe
fall in love
with whom?
Rottweilers foaming at the mouth
teeth gnashing at my throat if
I even say hello?
Connecting dots that make
a monster as I collect the threads
that burn so hot
the hope of friendship
keeps going up in flames.
The mirror stands for all,
look up and see
the self all poured
across these pages
is it who you want to be?
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Sep 28, 2007 4:57 PM CST Broken paradise
p_seg
p_segp_segCentral, Xlokk Malta340 Threads 4,497 Posts
Thanks for a brilliant post!! thumbs up applause

I just hope that the message gets through!! angel
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Sep 28, 2007 4:57 PM CST Broken paradise
Ulimaroa
UlimaroaUlimaroaCologne, Nordrhein-Westfalen Germany121 Threads 38 Polls 5,629 Posts
thumbs up
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Sep 28, 2007 5:08 PM CST Broken paradise
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thanks p seq.

It won't. This thread will sink to the bottom faster than one can say 'piss off'.

Very few people will respond to it and I don't keep bumping my stuff up to keep it front and center.

I am one of those quiet voices that cannot out shout the warmongers but I will keep dropping my two cents in.yay
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Sep 28, 2007 5:08 PM CST Broken paradise
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
thumbs up Thank you wine
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Sep 28, 2007 5:15 PM CST Broken paradise
sassie431
sassie431sassie431southern, California USA45 Threads 500 Posts
thumbs up Thank you
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Sep 28, 2007 5:21 PM CST Broken paradise
p_seg
p_segp_segCentral, Xlokk Malta340 Threads 4,497 Posts
Well, I can shout more than the warmongers, oh I can be much worse if the need arose, but experience has thought me that its better to ignore these kind of situations that we are seeing lately on the site.

After all, we should be here to make new friends, or maybe more, so what's the use of fighting and arguing? confused

Once again, thanks for your posting!!! handshake
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Sep 28, 2007 5:21 PM CST Broken paradise
The_Kansan
The_KansanThe_KansanKnoxville, Tennessee USA303 Threads 1 Polls 3,395 Posts
Thank you, Dorielle! Outstanding, as per usual!

For some reason, the old "Kilkenny Cats" limerick comes to mind:

There once was two cats from Kilkenny
Each though there was one cat too many
So they scratched and they fit
And they clawed and they bit
'Til instead of two cats, there weren't any!

thumbs up
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Sep 28, 2007 6:09 PM CST Broken paradise
Jackson
JacksonJacksonPowell, Tennessee USA31 Threads 680 Posts
Dorielle,

applause Excellent job, as usual!!! Your way with language is nonpariel! Have a fantastic weekend; "paradise be damned!" wine
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Sep 28, 2007 6:14 PM CST Broken paradise
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
Excelent ... simply excelent

Damit it went down so fast with all that stuff going on on a Friday night.

Sorry Lady i didn't see it before now sigh

Bravo! cheers
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Sep 28, 2007 6:19 PM CST Broken paradise
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
lol

ive used the word synchophant (sp) around here recently
deaf ears tho i did post i think a very short version of this today
it said time of dread i think

anyway

spooooky


you are my hero
the lake of serenity
i wish i would take the time to swim...





kiss
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Sep 28, 2007 6:19 PM CST Broken paradise
lorraine
lorrainelorraineDublin, Ireland104 Threads 2,717 Posts
wise words bajanblue.
Thank youthumbs up
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Sep 28, 2007 7:01 PM CST Broken paradise
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
applause hug
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Sep 28, 2007 7:05 PM CST Broken paradise
Oslojente
OslojenteOslojenteOlso, Oslo Norway142 Threads 1 Polls 4,992 Posts
thumbs up applause
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Sep 28, 2007 7:34 PM CST Broken paradise
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
I stopped in for a quick look before getting ready for work. A hug hug and a wavewave to everyone who has read and commented.

Glad you enjoyed my little rant.kiss

I'll be gone until dawn my time....about ten hours or so.

Have a splendid rest of Friday and a good Saturday morning.

I'll dedicate a song to all my CS buddies...have to think of something cool to play!yay
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Sep 28, 2007 8:24 PM CST Broken paradise
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
applause Sensational! Bravo! applause
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Sep 28, 2007 8:27 PM CST Broken paradise
Rickster
RicksterRicksterNew York, USA24 Threads 3,362 Posts
Another one...Thank you

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Sep 28, 2007 8:35 PM CST Broken paradise
HeartsDesire61
HeartsDesire61HeartsDesire61Hernando, USA17 Threads 1 Polls 1,087 Posts
cheering
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Sep 29, 2007 8:31 AM CST Broken paradise
Daniel4021
Daniel4021Daniel4021Somewhere, Tennessee USA157 Threads 8,986 Posts
Wonderful banjanblue, you won't ever have to worry about me slamming you...hug
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Sep 29, 2007 4:06 PM CST Broken paradise
Zellarrone1
Zellarrone1Zellarrone1Hull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UK33 Threads 4 Polls 7,644 Posts
What a masterpiece applause

I liked the bit about the "Rottweilers foaming at the mouth,
teeth gnashing at my throat if I even say hello?"... even though it does remind me of my dodgy neighbours reaction if I say hello to them which I don't do anymore anyway laugh

wine
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