star ee star ee star ee star ee night

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Aug 2009 885 Views 8 comments

star ee star ee star ee star ee night

did you see that! What i miss, oh was a falling star to the west, side by side on the table they lay, her breath an presence breathed in i'll stay, glimpse of eyes smile adorned face tighten the fingers, its their first embrace, still is the air, oh a meteor flare, eyes meet as one, no need to say, eyes said right away, dew in the night soon time soon flight another table another night on our backs we lay. with you is an can it be right!

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Posted: Aug 2009

About this poem:

4 beer an a poem lol, oops 5 that is as the cat said lol:)

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amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 14, 2009

You are on a "roll" tonight!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 14, 2009

That pillow's just way to comfey yeah an the cats in the back scratchin a new hole in the screen, he's a good cat, mr independent tho lol :)

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 14, 2009

Aren't cats supposed to be independent? They are the Kings of the domesticated animals!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 14, 2009

He is that, yet so social, i pick up the brush an he goes on his back, he truly is A CAT that owns me lol. Well i let him think that lol.

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 14, 2009

No...he owns you...he just lets you think you own him

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaAug 15, 2009

Nice poem Bentlee.. Whose table is it anyway??

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 15, 2009

It's mine, ty for your thought:)

WitchaywomanCarpentersville, Illinois USAAug 15, 2009

You shouldn't drink beer and write poetry. You should drink Box-o-wine. First of all, wine is the classical drink of poets (or maybe coffee.) Second, all the alcohol in a box o wine settles to the bottom of the winebag. So, when you go to drink the last few cups, it is like moonshine. So, you get that free bonus buzz. See, I'm full of useful advice.