Beautiful

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Dec 2010 648 Views 13 comments

"Beautiful"

As the wind places its feet upon the still morning

We awaken with soft tender

bliss....

the likeness of suckling

~~~~~~~

SS

xx

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Posted: Dec 2010

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Just IS......

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niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 4, 2010

I was with you at the beginning...then lost it....at the final phrase....but then, poetry does that often....maybe next time I read.....but I liked it....Niah

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandDec 4, 2010

Hi Niah sorry you lost it,
Love Soph

and thank you

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 4, 2010

Such an experiential write sophia... truly Universal

So much said and given, in so few words!

I love your analogy. Perfection!

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandDec 5, 2010

Thank you, Beautiful... an experimental write yes, I tried...
But the likeliness of succeeding...
I do not wonder.....
Sophia
xx

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKDec 5, 2010

Beautifully said SS......Thankyou.....Andrew...xxx

Swan87Syria, QatarDec 5, 2010

I like the way you Write !! You express yourself with sweet little words ..yet ..it means ALOT !
Thanks and keep goin'

Swan

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USADec 5, 2010

just is indeed, very soft and lovely sophia.

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandDec 5, 2010

Such A soft,gentle feeling it creates,said so well in just a few words.Lovely dear Sophia.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USADec 5, 2010

Hi, sophiasummer,
bliss is in the awakening and you finding the "Beautiful" in it.

ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas USADec 6, 2010

How the breeze tickles our faces in the morning air. Gorgeous write!

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKDec 6, 2010

I have no idea as to the last line but it matters not, it reads beautifully,

cj

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusDec 10, 2010

Simply amazing dear Sophia, thanks for sharing your exquisite soul with us...

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 10, 2010

No, no Sophia...an experiential write, not an experimental lol

;)

You more than succeeded! xx

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