Dad , We've finshed moving Out Our House is Empty.. And The Silence is so loud Dad , I wish you were around To see the new house .. I wonder if you're lookin down Upon us .. Dad , Today I've picked up The last Shirt you used to wear I can still smell your perfuem In it , everywhere I kept on hugging this shirt Till the last tear .. Dad , It's sad to leave this place Our last moments is living there .. Our laughs and talks .. And you're Beautiful face .. The house is empty dad .. As Im looking up to pray for you .. Wishing you peace and joy .. I hold on to your shirt for a while .. And locked up our house .. For the last time
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
We've moved out of the house where Dad past away ..and it's hard as hell to leave this place !! even the THINGS can say goodbye !!
Its really hard leaving a place with precious memories.I understand how you feel my dear,But remember wherever you go he goes with you cause he still lives in your heart.
Hi, Swan87, Unavoidably, loss manages to find us even when the House is Empty. Fortunately, so, too, do loving memories. May they continue to wrap around you with love and keep you safe and warm.
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaDec 14, 2010
Swan Yes,even their clothes seem to hold something....
Yes, Swan, it is so sad what you're writing ... The loss of your father ... it is so unbearable ... I wish that sharp pain of loss should pass away leaving just memories not so poignant at least. Keep in good spirits - that will help.
rickyoo7kolkata, West Bengal IndiaDec 15, 2010
nice way to epress how much u love n care someone..even we pray for joy n peace for ur dad's soul
sad Swan but a lovely remembrance, he goes with you anyway! rob
AJ1976Dubai, United Arab EmiratesDec 21, 2010
Such a touching poem; remember that our loved ones live on in our hearts and in our precious memories.. when you miss him just look in the mirror and he will be there, with the comforting, caring and heartwarming look that only a parent can give. God bless you dearest Swan, you are a wonderfully gentle soul..
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Unavoidably, loss manages to find us even when the House is Empty. Fortunately, so, too, do loving memories. May they continue to wrap around you with love and keep you safe and warm.
Yes,even their clothes seem to hold something....
rob