Youre my love

by marikiaTbilisi, Georgia

Dec 2010 750 Views 6 comments

You're my love

You’re my love I am dreaming of,
Hold my hand - never let it go.
Silver moon paints your face so cold,
You will need my love and support.

Hold my hand – never let it go,
My embrace will keep you warm.
You will need my love and support,
Cling to me – I’m the one who knows.

My embrace will keep you warm,
Two of us shall weather the storm.
Cling to me – I’m the one who knows,
Love will take us to better shores.

Two of us shall weather the storm.
Spring will come and will chase the cold.
Love will take us to better shores.
Trust in me while I'm holding the oar.

Spring will come and will chase the cold.
Hold me tight – keep that flame burning on.
Trust in me while I'm holding the oar.
You’re my love I am dreaming of.

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Posted: Dec 2010

About this poem:

Another attempt at pantoum.

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Comments (6)

CHIFIGHTERDEVENTER, Overijssel NetherlandsDec 25, 2010

Dear Marikia, this is some fine writing

you scath the pic of love and support for each other well

only through love and experience is one able to write such words.I also like how confident you sound in this poem!!!

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USADec 25, 2010

marikia, now that's a pantoum! well done friend. a loving and lovely poem, merry christmas. ;-)

marikiaOPTbilisi, GeorgiaDec 25, 2010

And Merry Christmas to you, my friends, many thanks for your appreciation. Yes, writing poems needs some life experience, otherwise you find it difficult to render real feelings. Very good point.