A Journey

Gentle spiral to the ground.
In circle motion round and round.
Dancing rhythm of its own.
Destination unknown.
Gust remove others.
Legions follow.
Leaving cover.
Soon replaced.
Seasons defaced.
Hint of color.
All so true.
Reaching to skies of blue.
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Posted: Jan 2011

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gnj4u
Hi, Happygolucky4u,
While Reaching to skies of blue, not unlike leaves, we all wish for a Gentle spiral to the ground. One season defaced gives rise to another to embrace...and so completes the circle. Lovely write!
Ladybee42
this is lovely stuff Happy! the skies were blue today and the snow was glued to the branches of the trees - like living in icing sugar land!grin
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
niah9
Beautiful ...Happygolucky4u....the journey was magical and mystical...loved it...Niah
jeddah12
beautiful poem deary,,thanks for sharingbouquet wine
agoodguy2have
H.G.L. - It keeps going 'round 'n 'round, this word filled journey, over poetic ground. ;-)
beautifulyou
Great analogy Happygolucky,,

I enjoyed this very much.
I think it's in the reaching that all goes on ~

Ty bouquet hug
Happygolucky4u
Thank you gnj4u. You got itthumbs up
Gosh I really wish I did not have so many leaves to get up. All those trees.sigh
Happygolucky4u
Thank you Ladybee. I bet this year you will be glad to see some green coming up and saying hey it is springlaugh
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