Real or Illusion

She came to me shy and sweet
Much like my dream's illusion
Virtual or is my dream complete
What is my realistic conclusion

Soft fine and long red wavy hair
Delicate ears and my caring fingers
Lips that are passionate and rare
The caressing arms that often linger

She has filled a void that was dark
Made me whole when life was bleak
She ignited a fire that was a spark
And made me feel special and unique

I think it's real for I know I can feel it
Certainly this is what life is meant to be
I know it's real for I can now see it
It's life, it's exhilaration, it's you and me!
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
resurrected feelings.

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Comments (16)

thesunandthesea
rose rose happy place WoWWwww++++++

IT'S REAL, I GUARANTEE!!!kiss And your write is REAL sweet!!!! I ALSO guarantee!!!! rose in teeth -> flower
niah9
Lovely boyshchrm.....real I think.....
I hope it is for keeps...guess I'll know when I get back....time for me to move....Niahcool teddybear
boyshchrm6
Thanks SandS for your great comment. Guarantee...but is that
just a tail light guarantee..lol.angel grin hug
Macduff5
A nice romantic write. Lovely feelings expressed. wine
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
She ignited a fire that was a spark And made me feel special and unique... Whether Real or Illusion the feeling is real - and a keeper!
jazzy75
Excellent write my friend....revel in the momentheart beating hug
Ladybee42
this is very sweet and romantic

nicely done thumbs up
teddybear teddybear
boyshchrm6
Thanks Macduff. Appreciate you thoughts very much.thanks cold snowglobe
boyshchrm6
Thanks gnj4u. Guess I used the
right bait this time...or maybe
she hasn't figured out what a
miserable SOB I really am yet...lol. TYangel hug peace grin cool
Chrone
why is so important if is real or just illusion? sometimes an illusion counts more than a real fake one! good luck another good one! thumbs up
boyshchrm6
Thanks LadyBee for your wonderful remarks.
angel grin wave writing cold
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comment ProfileDeleted
whoever you may be. I hope your return
soon...lol.dunno angel thumbs up cool grin
thelmatalla
Resl or illusion....certainly, this is what life is meant to be! Excellent fine write Boycharm!teddybear bouquet
thelmatalla
Gosh! saw my mistake, Real.... real excellent poetry again!heart beating bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks Thelmatalla. I guess if it is real
we could take a rest from our quest...lol.
angel cool dancing hug
itchywitch
blissfully beautiful boy teddybear
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