Shopping-cart wrangler

The shopping-cart wrangler stands leaning
on his trusted blue-hided steed looking
across the aisles...miles of aisles for
his errant stead, aimless and wandering,
shiny and gaunt, slowly grazing the lot.

He's traded his cowboy hat for a hoodie
and his boots for some black high-tops.
Still the winter winds bite as they fly
across the blacktop lines and scatter
his herd about the white-lined plains.

He'll go out again, rounding them up,
getting them in line, head to tail,
and silently push the ruck with his electric
pony back to their corral and into
the shopping-cart barn for eager buyers.

© agoodguy2have 2011-02-19
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
an all American icon

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Comments (11)

hedistuff
if one made a graph, superimposing the trails of all the round-ups that day.....would it show us the artist's canvas? some may see life's secrets. others, just a bunch of jiggily lines. such original thoughts you have, goodguy......
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Does the nature of the ruck or the wrangler matter? "Home, home on the range" just doesn't seem quite the same...but, is it? I ponder.
Ladybee42
laugh okay, I have seen this first hand now and this says it quite nicely. you americans - you just love your cars, perhaps the term an 'auto-cratic society' should have a new meaning now?
a solid write goodguy

thumbs up teddybear teddybear
Fellsman
Hi Good Guy

Lots of off beat imagery here, enjoyed the read...

Regards

Bill cheers
Macduff5
Shopping trollies are a bit of an icon here too GG and we have the same kind of wranglers who find their strays in all sorts of bizarre places. A clever take on a well known pursuit. wine thumbs up
swade777
Sounds an awful lot like Wal Mart to me!! "Get-um up! Roll um out!" It's the Shopping Cart Stampede!

Good to see you again goodguy! I've looked for you and ain't seen you around much! You were one of the first poets to inspire me to come back to 'the corner' after testing the waters with one of my poems some time ago. Thanks for that influence and welcoming attitude!
ReaderOfSouls
Dave,

Boy, do I know this one. This one had me laughing. laugh I *LOVE* the detail! thumbs up Consider yourself lucky that you don't have to wear boots and spurs and throwing a loop to gather the stragglers. laugh Back in my college days, I worked at the local grocery store. One of my chores involved shopping cart wrangling. :) In all manner of weather, heat, cold, rain or snow, we were sent out to fetch the dogies home. We'd find them clear across the lot on the other side of the shopping mall, behind the mall and gathered up in herds behind old cars. Never a day went by that we didn't find a dogie somewhere. :)
boyshchrm6
Lacks a little of the romance of the old West but a good analogy.
Entertaining write Agoodguyapplause thumbs up cheers
schawalski
I like the style , maybe he was reincarnated , anyway I like the poemm also, I sometimes write like this .
caroljoyce
Rappingly different, astute.
cj
Happygolucky4u
The endless job of the shopping cart wranglerssigh Finially a fine tribute to themwine
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