life around love

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

Sep 2011 905 Views 13 comments

life around love

you in this lifetime to love
in this lifetime to love you
this lifetime to love you in
life time to love you in this
time to love you in this life
to love you in this lifetime
love you in this lifetime too
you in this lifetime to love

© Goode Guy 2011-09-12

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Posted: Sep 2011

About this poem:

something different

for Alan and Marilyn and Barbra

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Comments (13)

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 13, 2011

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USASep 13, 2011

I wondered what The GoodGuy brought forth today and it seems a cirlce of love

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USASep 14, 2011

That's actually very creative!! When I got to the the 7th line and saw "TOO", I had to go back and reread it several times to try and figure out the right cadence for it to make sense! Talk about a brain bender!! Sort of like: "Your walk talks, and your talk talks, but your walk talks louder than your talk talks!"

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 14, 2011

Hi GG,

I love this sort of wordplay. Very clever.

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USASep 14, 2011

A circle of love...what comes around goes around....

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 20, 2011

Hi, agoodguy2have,
No matter how the words are arranged, your poem leaves one with the image of love within lifetime and the hope for life around love.

Lavender_BlueBirmingham, West Midlands, England UKSep 21, 2011

Very creative, Goodguy.

Original and soulful.

LB

Amendashenyang, Liaoning ChinaSep 21, 2011

amazing!!

We also have this kind of poem in Chinese...so English also have this...wonderful!!

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaSep 21, 2011

Time to love in this lifetime, till it is not too late, till life is gone without any love to boast about. Thank you for sharing this structurally and essentially intriguing poem with us! Love feels in the air of this corner. Good luck to you!