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life around love

you in this lifetime to love
in this lifetime to love you
this lifetime to love you in
life time to love you in this
time to love you in this life
to love you in this lifetime
love you in this lifetime too
you in this lifetime to love

© Goode Guy 2011-09-12
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Posted: Sep 2011
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something different

for Alan and Marilyn and Barbra

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steve1223
grin grin grin grin grin grin grin
fjamesj9701
I wondered what The GoodGuy brought forth today and it seems a cirlce of lovegrin
swade777
That's actually very creative!! When I got to the the 7th line and saw "TOO", I had to go back and reread it several times to try and figure out the right cadence for it to make sense! Talk about a brain bender!! Sort of like: "Your walk talks, and your talk talks, but your walk talks louder than your talk talks!"
Macduff5
Hi GG,

I love this sort of wordplay. Very clever. cheers
country_lady67
A circle of love...what comes around goes around....purple heart
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
No matter how the words are arranged, your poem leaves one with the image of love within lifetime and the hope for life around love.
Lavender_Blue
Very creative, Goodguy.

Original and soulful.

LB
purple heart
Amenda
amazing!!teddybear
We also have this kind of poem in Chinese...so English also have this...wonderful!!teddybear
marikiaonline today!
Time to love in this lifetime, till it is not too late, till life is gone without any love to boast about. Thank you for sharing this structurally and essentially intriguing poem with us! Love feels in the air of this corner. Good luck to you!heart beating heart beating heart beating
pilgrimageoflove
Exactly!

grin
Ayhra
Original and fresh poem goodguy handshake
Yankee4you
Puzzle poem I love it!! :)
jena_massie
sounds like
inspiringhandshake
lovely
lifegrin
love toogift
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