being the cut-up i was back when i lost my nut and she bolted away i found myself half of scissors say singular scissor not much more than an ice pick is, more to the point
yet what can be done when two useful parts fall apart, depart to become as it were (is?) ...a sciss
chipping away at the cold icy truth that one must use to survive snowing the rest around as i dig into another bit of frozen flow
to tool or not... whether it's designed to be of use to other even others, or just turn the puzzle, hardware in hand
discerning or dis-earning casting aside snippets confettied triangles some papered cuts life's try angles
When I read this I thought you had surgery.. then I reread and again.. you know I probably have a spare nut in my tool box that I can reapir your sciss ors with..
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 13, 2011
Woah goodguy! I feel that cold icy chill up my back..I'm getting the point..ouch! Quite ingenious way in which you use your sciss- or's to reveal 'life's try angles..' A brilliant snippet of words cut up with only half a scissor..I believe you may be chipping away at poetic immortality!
Hi, agoodguy2have, As you turn the puzzle, hardware in hand, a successful mix of creativity and discerning humor emerges. casting aside snippets, the poet has made a most enjoyable poem using some papered cuts that get right to the point of life's try angles.
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaAug 14, 2011
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 14, 2011
Hi Good Guy
This is an ode to the uni-sciss, a veritable origami of well chosen words... As Mark Antony would no doubt have said had he lost a blade of his scissors: "This is the most unkindest cut of all". (The most unkindest cut was not considered ungrammatical in Shakespeare's day).
A fun write GG
Regards
Bill
Lavender_BlueBirmingham, West Midlands, England UKAug 14, 2011
This clever poem appeals to the intricate machinations of my mind!
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As you turn the puzzle, hardware in hand, a successful mix of creativity and discerning humor emerges. casting aside snippets, the poet has made a most enjoyable poem using some papered cuts that get right to the point of life's try angles.
rob
This is an ode to the uni-sciss, a veritable origami of well chosen words... As Mark Antony would no doubt have said had he lost a blade of his scissors: "This is the most unkindest cut of all". (The most unkindest cut was not considered ungrammatical in Shakespeare's day).
A fun write GG
Regards
Bill
The "cutting edge" of poetry! :)
Well done,
LB