Spirit Haiku

Your beauty intense
Viewed thru your pure spirit
Reveals the true you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
My first attempt at a Haiku

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Comments (14)

agoodguy2have
boyshchrm6, a worthy first attempt of 5-7-5. ;-}
boyshchrm6
Thanks Goodguy. Technically correct but
I susect needs more impact. TYangel cheers
Chrone
Thanks for the new verse form, wonderful expess!dancing
Redex
boyshcrm6 a wonderful does nor seem like first attempt, Haikuteddybear
Happygolucky4uonline today!
That is really nicebouquet
marikia
With her beauty intense and pure spirit she must me a true gift sent from the heavens. I liked your first and successful attempt very much.
jazzy75
Lovely!! and exactly my kinda poem ;)hug
caroljoyce
Mine too, neat and lovely like spirit itself,cj
boyshchrm6
Thanks Chrone. I guess I'll try the
odd Haiku until I feel comfortable
with that format. Perhaps do a little
experimentation. peace angel
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much Redex. You have
a great week. angel cool
niah9
It's looks perfect boyshchrm......I haven't even attempted one yet....good for you....thumbs up wow Niahteddybear yay
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much Happygolucky.angel cool bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much for your comment Marikia. TY angel cool sad flower
jeddah12
very well written indeed,boysh...very nicely saidwine
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