My Only Wish

Mar 2011 797 Views 19 comments

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If...you had three wishes,

What would do you?

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If...I had three wishes,
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“I wish I were there with you”
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And then,

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I would give away two.

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Posted: Mar 2011

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RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 5, 2011

A lovely thing to read before I switch off:you have a lovely

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 5, 2011

Thank you REDEX )))

Hope you have a lovely switch off...lol When you switch on, pls stop by again .. lol

0rpheusSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMar 5, 2011

Awesome!!

I love the sentiment, well done.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 5, 2011

SaS

Anyone lucky enough to have your friendship has riches beyond the dreams of avarice.

Beautiful succinct verse...

Bill x

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 5, 2011

0rpheus Thank you. ^_^

oh-- just leave me a comment ok, dont play music! I don't want to move to anywhere right now.. lol

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 5, 2011

^_^ Thank you Bill...

I always love your sweet comment. ^_*

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaMar 5, 2011

Hey Jib. I have dibs on those other two wishes ok. Just email them to me. Nice sentiments in your poem though...remember send the others to me...lol.

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 5, 2011

boyshchrm Thank you ^_^

$999-/nett per each? deal?

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAMar 5, 2011

Jib... this is just so unselfishly awesome! Short, sweet, romantic, and generous how much better could it be? Only one way... for your FIRST wish to placed with "ME!" I liked this one! A LOT! :-)