With You A Double Acrostic

Mar 2011 1,097 Views 16 comments

"With You" (A Double Acrostic)

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What I am going to do noW
Is to buy Pizza and PepsI
Together with a big hot tarT
Homemade mustard tuna sandwicH
Yoghurt topped with red cherrY
Once everything’s set I’ll gO
Undoubtedly, I’ll eat them all with yoU!

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Posted: Mar 2011

About this poem:

A double acrostic poem is the same as an acrostic poem, except that the line ends with the same letter that it starts with.

^___^ So, I just try! lol it's fun!

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Comments (16)

0rpheusSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMar 6, 2011

Nice, I bet it was doubly as difficult to.

schawalskiCork, IrelandMar 6, 2011

and double fantastic, this makes me so hungry

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAMar 6, 2011

I want Pizza too!

very clever work S&S, I'm not even going to try!

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaMar 6, 2011

Methinks you may be
challenging others. Very inventive SandS.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 6, 2011

Dearest SaS

I must have a word with you about your diet, young lady... Pizza and pepsi? AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH! Homemade Mustard Tuna - maybe OK on wholemeal bread. And you'd still have room for yogurt and cherries after all that?

The diet might not be good, but the double acrostic is very clever and well written.

Well done, Jib.

Bill

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAMar 6, 2011

S.A.S. - double acrostic, unlike fells, i'd be happy 2 eat the pizza & pepsi, do you deliver? nice job! ;-)

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMar 7, 2011

Looks like you are having a health lunch Sassy. I'd never heard of a double acrostic before this, so well done. This is very clever indeed. You may have invented a whole new poetic genre.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 7, 2011

Wow so clever you

glad of the invite, but must have ice cream too and a

instead of pepsi please.

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

Mr. Orpheus, Thank you for dropping me a line! : )

Yes, it was! ^_^ and it will be TRIPLE difficult for you as ‘acrostic’ doesn’t need ‘Ryhme’ LOL

It suits me cus am not good at english, lol

but not for someone who was born for writing “RYHME” poems, and he DID all PERFECT RHYME poems!! ‘someone’ like you. ^__^ I love your poems cus it all has nice ‘rhyme’ !!

I enjoyed reading them all!! ^___^ yeah, I’ve read them all )))

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

Schawalski : Thank you sooo much for the comment.

Yeah when I saw your comment, it makes me Double Hungry too!! (( Can I eat that ‘dancing banana’ ??

He looks ‘Yummy’ LOL ))

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

Awww LadyBeeeee ))) I missed your face!! Howdy?

I wont share Pizza with you

unless you come here!!!

Thank you very much for reading and commenting… You are not even going to try OR you don’t even have time to try? heeheehe busy dating ooops

busy traveling with mr. RB lol ((your are LB, he is RB)) lol soul mateeeeeeeeee….

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

Hi Mr. BM)))

Thank you fairy much)))) lol But I wanted to challenged you most..LOL &

Can you do one for me?

with the word ‘JIBBERISH’ LOLOLOLOL

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

Aww THANK YOU for reading))) Mr. GG!!!!

YESSSSS I delivery both pizza n pepsi!!

But you need to order as a set!

We highly recommended ‘Weekly Hot Set’ includes Pizza, Pepsi , Me !!! LOL

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAMar 7, 2011

^_^ Thank you for using your loving fingers typing me a comment, Mr. Macduff)) ^_^ lol

Yeahhh it’s health lunch Robbie, Now you’ve heard of a DOUBLE ACORSTIC! ^_^ so…have you ever heard of a DOUBLE ROMANTIC?

C’mon here I will tell you. LOL