I'm not asking for goodbye Cuz it's already over And I don't want you to try Or even remember Even the Saddness That I keep in my heart Is not for you .. And Im not yours too ..
So farewell my dearest enemy You gave me tears When Everyone was nice to me You gave me pain When the world was full of colors Full of rain .. You broke your promise When everybody around was so honest Love is not about being Powerful.. Love is to be so Thoughtful .. But I wont be lovin' you So Farewell my dearest enemy ..
that'sa relief swan87 I was starting to sweat abit
stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAMar 9, 2011
yes that means since your her dearest friend im not even though i helped her along this...
Dervish_dervishNew delhi, Delhi IndiaMar 9, 2011
Wallah!what a remarkable & soooooo.beautiful rhyme.khuda haafiz.
Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 9, 2011
John !! You're my bro and my best friend and Habibi !! don't forget that !
Swan
Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 9, 2011
Dervish_dervish .. Thanx
Swan
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 9, 2011
Hi Swan
You deal with your betrayal in such a positive fashion, good for you for not wasting too much time and emotion on someone who clearly isn't worth the effort.
Great write
Bill
Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 14, 2011
Hey Dear Fellsman Gotta tell you .. I do write a lot of Broken hearted poems ! But even with a broken heart !! Rules are Rules ..and my Respect is what im lookin for in the man of my dreams !! so yeah ..i dont wanna waste my time !
Thanks for ur comments , I appricate everything you say to me Have A good Day Sir
Swan
immortaldreamamman, Amman JordanMar 14, 2011
an enemy you know is much better than a 1000 friends that you don't know
0rpheusSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMar 14, 2011
Nice poem Swan,
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 14, 2011
Great fitting title....dearest enermy...how fitting is that, when tagged to a once love.....as we tug ourselves free.....knowing it cannot be....Niah
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Swan
Swan
Swan
You deal with your betrayal in such a positive fashion, good for you for not wasting too much time and emotion on someone who clearly isn't worth the effort.
Great write
Bill
Gotta tell you .. I do write a lot of Broken hearted poems !
But even with a broken heart !! Rules are Rules ..and my Respect is what im lookin for in the man of my dreams !!
so yeah ..i dont wanna waste my time !
Thanks for ur comments ,
I appricate everything you say to me
Have A good Day Sir
Swan