Im Okay

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Mar 2011 719 Views 13 comments

I'm Okay

Author: Unknown

Im not okay
I don't feel so safe
And without you it's so dangerous
Out there ..

Feel so alone
With no missed calles on my telephone
Without you it's no home ..

So why do I feel this way
So what if you walked away ..

I'll be stronger , I will hold myself
So much Smarter , I'll be with somebody else
I can't take no more knifes in my back
Im Turning my life up side down
Gonna live my life with a real man
And next time when you hear my voice
I'll smile and say
Im Okay

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Posted: Mar 2011

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RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 23, 2011

You are okay swan you do know what you need and what you don't

Stay safe within yourself the rest just follows

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 23, 2011

Thanks for your sweet advice sis .. You're always there for me
Im glad u liked this one ..
Take Care always

Swan

christian22cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 23, 2011

hi swan, good for you swan, its easy to be let down by people, you are doing ok when you can write this out..even if hurt may linger..so here is to you being fully ok..

good thoughtful poem that will encourage someone..to be okay..

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 23, 2011

Hey christian
Means ALOT to me that you liked this one ..
and yes .. taking control of my life seams much eaiser when im feeling better and OKAY !
You Take Care My Friend

Swan

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaMar 23, 2011

Oh I do like this courageous work!Stay strong.. Kudos !

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 23, 2011

All My Respect to you Beautiful Lady QuietStormF

THANK YOU ,,

Swan

iamwhoiamyouseeanywhere, Bavaria GermanyMar 23, 2011

yes my dear swan although it hurts it will make you stronger and smarter..keep your head up ..your a gem and the right fitting will come along

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 23, 2011

Be strong...it may be the harder of options, but you know...because you have thought it through and have the answers...so do what you must for yourself....it'll get better...believe me...it will...and as my friend says whenever we part....BE BRAVE.....
Take care Swan....Niah

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 24, 2011

iamwhoiamyousee
Niah

Both of You Ladies are too Sweet , For Giving such Wise Advices and Nice words .. YOU MADE MY DAY !!!
THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL LADIES !!

@Niah : " BE BRAVE "!! I LOVE this ! THANX !

Here is for a better Day

Swan

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaMar 24, 2011

All that I wished to say has already been said in the previous comments. You are strong enough, this I can easily read in your poem, in which you sound reassuring and showing an example of how to endure and overcome the pain. Thanks for the poem.

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 24, 2011

NO .. THANK YOU FOR BEING THE SWEETEST .. THANKS FOR YOUR WORDS MY DEAR
I become stronger everytime im writing in here between my family in the poetry Section !!
Love you all

Here is a rose for you ..

Swan

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 25, 2011

Hi, Swan87,
It's far more dangerous to live with knifes in my back. Knowing in your heart that I'm Okay says a great deal about inner strength. Well done!

Swan87OPSyria, QatarMar 27, 2011

Thanks alot for such wise and special words my dear ..
nothing in the world compare to inner streinght

Have A nice Day

Swan

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