Queen Of Goodbies

by Unknown

Apr 2011 502 Views 14 comments

Queen Of Goodbies

Author: Unknown

Here we go again
Im Puttin on my sad face
Feelin' all kinda shame
With you In the same place

Another Man
Another story
Welcome into my life
Another kiss
And a " please Don't worry "
I'll stay with you till the end of time
And it's all the same for me
My heart is full of empty promises
And Yes ,I know it would end , so painfully
Welcome into my life
Im The Queen of Goodbies !

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Posted: Apr 2011

About this poem:

One of My sweetest friends in CS , called me once with this name
" Queen of Goodbies " cuz most of my poems are about Goodbies and love loss !! So I came up with this Write !

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Comments (14)

stillbluerainRochelle, Illinois USAApr 12, 2011

nice sweet swan

Swan87OPSyria, QatarApr 12, 2011

Thanks

Swan

gvmeu2springfield, Massachusetts USAApr 12, 2011

powerful write but whats even more powerful is the fact that the weak ones who've come and gone ironically empower you to truly appreciate the real man when he arrives. keep your head to the sky swan87 there is a blessing especially for you

Swan87OPSyria, QatarApr 13, 2011

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment !!
God Bless u ! and thanks for reading !

Swan

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAApr 13, 2011

Still searching is a lifelong journey for some and you have
put feeling into this honest poem. Thanks for sharing.

Swan87OPSyria, QatarApr 13, 2011

Glad you liked it Mr.Yankee , Nice meeting you here
God Bless ..

Swan

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 14, 2011

I'll settle for the fact that you're a Queen! And that's another story. Queen Swan, Chapter One: Once upon a time there lived..

niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 14, 2011

Life is a journey of broken promises, hearts and expectations Swan...but we have to experience tham all, to know where we hit the jackpot....cool write....Niah

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKApr 15, 2011

Dear Swan

You write so eloquently here, I am absolutely sure that one day you will meet your Prince Charming, and not have to wory about 'goodbyes' ever again.

Here is a hug all the way from England...

Best wishes

Bill

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaApr 15, 2011

Great write Swan but sad. Your day will come
when someone comes along that deserves you...in the
meantime don't let your heart become cold.

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandApr 15, 2011

Oh so sad! but really cool, love it!

christian22cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 15, 2011

hi swan, what a tender and sad poem, you put it together so very well..hope somewhere in your journey you will be able to loose that title..for something better..thoughtful poem..

ForeverDestinySouth Amherst, Ohio USAApr 15, 2011

Sadly you tell the story of so many. To look forward and know that one gone makes way for the right one.. It doesn't though, relieve the pain of the time which you have captured for many of us.
A piece such as this written from the heart, creates its own eloquence as it flows from you.
Well done. Sad. Real. Still, well done.
Here's to tomorrow...