(": oN FiNe DaY! :")

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Near is near; near is not far.

Right there where you are never too far from here!

Stay is stay; stay is not sway.

If ever you sway, I’d never want to stay!

A tear is a tear; a tear is not a shower.

Tears are falling, showers are showering!

A cheek is a cheek; a cheek is not a chest.

Tears on my cheek always are shed by your chests!

A head is a head; a head is not a heel.

When I see you I feel, love you head over heel!

An ear is an ear; an ear is not an eye.

When you are in my eyes, I notify my heart beat by my ears!

A feeling is a feeling; a feeling is not a finger.

My feeling’s getting stronger when your fingers touch my skins!

A past is a past; a past is not a present.

Past I was lonely but I’m happy at the present!

Blue is blue, blue is not blind.

You took away my blues, your love has made me blind!

A bride is a bride; a bride is not a butterfly.

You asked me to be your bride I felt butterflies in my tummy!

Two is two, two is not three.

You and I are two but with you I wanna have three!

A voice is a voice, a voice not a not a vow.

I wanna hear your voice saying my marriage vow!

Today is today, today is not tomorrow.

I like you today, I’ll love you tomorrow!

Tomorrow is tomorrow, tomorrow is not forever,

I’ll love you tomorrow; I’ll be with you forever!!!

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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
Just a poem on Fine Day.... lol ^___^
Hope you all a very happy lovely fine day!!!!
Keep smiling!!! I LOVE IT! @^______^@

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gnj4u
Hi, thesunandthesea,
When you are in my eyes, I notify my heartbeat by my ears is such a marvelous line! Alan Jay Lerner's lyrics may say, "On a clear day you can see forever"; but, I say (": oN FiNe DaY! :") says it, too! I love the creativity of your poetic post and the postage-stamp's royal couple.
mcradloff
In that picture, is that your boyfriend? Nice write!teddybear popcorn bowing
thesunandthesea
Dear gnj4u))) thank you for your comment. rose in teethXXX you made me blush!blushing And I am flattered. ^_^

Today is really a FINE day for me.. cus I sleep all day. lol.. Guess what I went to bed since 10 pm last night and woke up at 3 pm. sleep lol..sleep like a dead rock! lol I could win Sleeping Olympic! dancing lol …never had such a full sleep like this for a long time,happy place and when I woke up, I wrote a poem cus I missed poetryyyyyyy board)))) … it’s high season for my work. I think… coffee2 btw, did you go to Turkey? Where is my souvenir? lol gift

ps.1 --- ermm…. right now I still have no idea what is ‘ninety nine’ stand for …? -_-‘’ could you please telllllll meeeeeeee… hahaha I know only “sixty nine” LOL :P

ps.2---- I liked the stamp too. ^_^ Lovelyyy))) ^__^ just like me and you. lol flower love everything that’s lovely!!! ^_^ esp, lovely people!lips ^_*
thesunandthesea
Dear Mcradloff, lol where is “Mr. teddy”teddybear and “Ms. bunny” bunny ??? I didn’t see them this time..blues say hello to them too okay! wave Missed them!---- LOL I'm sorry if you didn’t use the teddy and bunny this time ‘cus I teased you. hmmm : ) But you know it’s CUTE! A guy with bunny & teddy! lol Girls will like it. : ) Me liked it too! blushing

Yeahh it’s a pic of me and my GIRLfriend, me is the one who wears uniform! cool LOL--- Does the girl in the pic really look like me? ?? batting lolol That’s why I think the girl is really cute!love !! awww+++ lol well, it’s a lovely portrait drawing and I loved it. kiss

: ) ask me anything if you’d like to know,peace but one thing I don’t want to reply is about my financial… talk to hand lol do not ask or borrow me money… lol me broke!

Thank you Mike for your lovely comment and such a cute question.purple heart

teddybearbunny teddybear
caroljoyce
Very, very sweet. THANKS,
CJpurple heart
Fellsman
That superb sketch brings to mind the beautiful aria "Un bel di" (One Fine Day) from Puccini's magnificent opera "Madam Butterfly". Initially I wondered if the title of your poem was a typo, but now I incline towards GNJ's thoughts - though the song "On a clear day" was inspired by 'One Fine Day'.

I am sure the American Captain in your sketch would treat you much more kindly than Madam Butterfly's wayward lover treated her in the opera. innocent

Best wishes

Bill x hug
cafetwo2010
Wow sunandthesea! That was so creative and heartwarming. You are a very special kind of poet! You are you smitten and there can't be two!yay
thesunandthesea
Thank you, Carol XXXXX ^__^ I know I AM 'very very sweeeeeeet!' blushing How about my poem???? shock lololol :p heehee kiddin' I know you meant my poem.. :p laugh

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I'm planning to change my hair color to the same color as yours soon (may be next week)..batting huhuhu (my secret hmmm) ^__^ LOVED ITS COLOR A LOT!!!!! love smitten
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