Beautiful boyshchrm...can't you coax your summer love back..... faint heart never won fair lady....or was she no more than a summer dream.....niah
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJun 2, 2011
This poem seems to have enough 'music' in it to be converted into a beautiful song!! Any musicians out there that see this possibility? I'm no musician - admittedly, but I think I hear music playing when reading this one!!
Ah there is nothing quite like summer love.. beautiful poem, and you have made it so real.. what's even better though, is summer love that lasts all year long..
A summer from long ago Niah but still vivid in the recess of my brain. TY
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJun 2, 2011
[Then I caressed sensuous hips]
OK, i'm going to start calling you Casanova, instead of Canada, lol, and, i burnt the pizza[i'm eating it anyway, too lazy to go get another...], so mesmerized was i by those thighs...
Okay...so it's long ago.....time to go in search again....and I agree.....Canadian casanova.... Look at all the ladies waiting in the wings.... It really is a great poem..... Niah
Hi, boyshchrm6, Summer Love still lives in the poet's heart and there's someone out there waiting to share it. It's time to go out and make new memories and write more love poems - with happier endings!
No EarlgreyTea. No Casanova here. Mostly stuff from way in the past or dreams of the future...or perhaps my vivid imagination. Just Canada will be more than safice. TY
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJun 11, 2011
Yes boyshchrm6 and the summers go and come but the nature is true to herself, lovely poem
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I'm no musician - admittedly, but I think I hear music playing when reading this one!!
Nicely done boyshchrm!!
Q~S
vivid in the recess of my brain. TY
OK, i'm going to start calling you Casanova, instead of Canada, lol, and, i burnt the pizza[i'm eating it anyway, too lazy to go get another...], so mesmerized was i by those thighs...
rob
Look at all the ladies waiting in the wings.... It really is a great poem.....
Niah
Summer Love still lives in the poet's heart and there's someone out there waiting to share it. It's time to go out and make new memories and write more love poems - with happier endings!
I'm humming a few bars now...lol.
Summer love, Winter love, Year round love
hey...it's all good QS.
way in the past or dreams of the future...or perhaps
my vivid imagination. Just Canada will be more than
safice. TY
as a high compliment. Did you have
to say "old"?
son full of feeling ,
real good soud in it
what a gret idea...lol...and it is
half over now...
seem in order...time marches on...
forever now!! Thanks for the comments.
of my poem.
come back from Seclusion soon.