~in my hammock~

between pine's I lay care free closed eye with nature's flute'd ballet........ gentle breeze blankets me cradled rock tween ere trees....... peaceful place to have found close eyed sight quite profound. . . . . think here's for a while where I'll stay~ Bentlee
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Posted: Sep 2009

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andrew149
sounds beautiful bentlee, don't suppose you got another spare hammock there you can lend me...
trurorob
I ca concur with that Bentlee as an ex Matelot the best sleep ever in the old hammock lovely poem
Rob
amahlala
I guess a hammock could be as peaceful as a floatie on the water.
Bentlee
lol it's a triple wide one, I'll just slide over an two friends can share in the peaceful grandeur:) cheers my friend.
spiritwalker
I for one know what your talking about I have spent many peaceful hours in one just lookin at the beauty around I live at the lake most of the summer try making love in one of them yahoooo well that is another story and not for in here
Bentlee
ah tis the life Rob, many a sleep in one I've had as well:)
Bentlee
Lol i'm sure it would or is the same on water, hmmm perhaps build a floating hammock:)
amahlala
A floating hammock would truly be a sight to see!
andrew149
now that would be cool, hmmmm possible too!professor
Bentlee
Ty spirit walker for your comment an your youthful outlook lol .
boyshchrm6
Peaceful.Gonna built a hammock tommorrow.sleep
Bentlee
cheers, time to build it. it does sound peaceful there
Bentlee
very possible my friend
Bentlee
Ama it would a sight that i'd be lolrolling on the floor laughing
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