what a powerful pen to describe a person with severe handicaps.. and what it must be like.. and what do most people do when they see this ..look the other way and pretend to NOT see.. when a kind word could make a difference. CL
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJul 18, 2011
Great write Steve....the eyes tell their basic inner thoughts if you look deep enough...you have captured it perfectly.....something we need to observe...a sadness that is growing...niah
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 18, 2011
WOW, Steve, this is a fantastic poem, made me feel sad though, reminded me of my Darling husbands last years on this earth.
Your poems are very Philosophical.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 18, 2011
This is a sad but true poem, certainly brings it home.What a write
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Your poems are very Philosophical.