I Am So In Love With You (rewrite of Poetnumber1)

This feeling that i feel,leaves me breathless
So please take your foot out of my mouth
And so weak inside,these feelings i just can't hide
That's why there's a zipper in my chest
You complete me from a life of incompletion
You screw on my false legs and arms
You are my beginning and true revelation
And if I'm not carefull you'll be my end
A hope through hopelessness,that carries me through the storm
And you are hopeless, why take me out into the storm
My light in a world of darkness,past the break of dawn
So remove this blindfold from my eyes before morn
I love you with each passion and might
Then again I might not with too much passion
My soul could never reach,when feeling out of sight
And these purple pills also make me feel out of sight
I love you to the depths,the breadth and the height
And there is a lot of depth, height and breadth
You came in my life,and made everything feel so right
You paralyzed my left side
You are the wind that gives me spirit
I just wish the wind didn't come from your rear end
And keeps my very soul alit
So keep the matches out of the way
A heaven away from a life of hell
A hell of a way to get to heaven
I'm lost in your beauty,binded by your spell
Hocus pocus you will now think I'm gorgeous
And those lips like the petals of a pretty rose
Just watch those darn thorns
Soft and sexy,everyone knows
At twenty dollars everyone can know
I am so in love with you girl
As long as you pay me
I just want you to know
What everyone already knows
That from strength to strength,our love will grow
We'll be right as long as you take penicillin
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
A collaboration between Poetnumber1 and myself. He provided the original poem 'I Am So In Love With You' to which I added my twist. Poetnumber1 and myself hope you all enjoy this read.

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netman
Oh man the pair of you should work together more often - this kills me - I'll be the first to sign the petition

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Ayhra
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing Love it!!! Thank you boys, well done :D
teddybear
justbereall
That was amazing great job u 2 peace
boyshchrm6
Wonderful twist Steve. Twenty bucks seems cheap.rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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