I gathered my love, my hopes, my dreams Together I placed them in a bottle This bottle tightly I did seal And threw it in the ocean This love I send out to thee My hopes go along with it And all my dreams for you to see Of where my heart is leading Pray these currents ever true Take this bottle straight to you
A very nice poem. I hope that the bottle did come back to you!
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusOct 3, 2011
succinct, pithy and so elegantly poetic, thanks for gracing us with your gentle and heartfelt words Steve...
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 3, 2011
I gathered my love, my hopes, my dreams Together I placed them in a bottle This bottle tightly I did seal And threw it in the ocean This love I send out to thee My hopes go along with it And all my dreams for you to see Of where my heart is leading Pray these currents ever true Take this bottle straight to you
Lovely one Steve.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 3, 2011
Hi Steve
Small, but perfectly formed...
Regards
Bill
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 4, 2011
Nice poem Steve
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 4, 2011
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Together I placed them in a bottle
This bottle tightly I did seal
And threw it in the ocean
This love I send out to thee
My hopes go along with it
And all my dreams for you to see
Of where my heart is leading
Pray these currents ever true
Take this bottle straight to you
Lovely one Steve.
Small, but perfectly formed...
Regards
Bill
cafetwo2010
thelmatalla
agnata
Earlgreytea
Odette67
Fellsman
Ayhra
Thank you all for your kind comments