when I breathe you in

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Sep 2009 785 Views 13 comments

~when I breathe you in~

kindled heart fires

when I breathe you in endorphined mind quake's

when I breathe you in shuttered breath makes a tighter embrace

when I breathe you in pinnacled thought not to expire

when I breathe you in your scent's overwhelm brief moments within

when I breathe you in that breath's gone
an is time for the next to begin

when I breathe you in it's your hair on my face in my hand

when I breathe you in my troubles seem at bay

when I breathe you in all this time, on your face
love display~

~Bentlee~

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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (13)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainSep 26, 2009

I like that bentlee,
It has alot of meaning
Rob

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 26, 2009

Ty Rob I'm glad you liked, it's easy to get to that place with the one you love, only a matter of letting it happen:) cheers an ty for your comment.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 26, 2009

A beautiful poem Bentlee-i like it

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaSep 26, 2009

wow my dear friend , very ture lovely feelings , u make me live the moment u write it , i live this moment beleive me , ur words always very beautiful my dear friend , thanks for ur sweet shares here , u make this site rich with ur words

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 26, 2009

Gypsy. . . i'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to put out how it can be an also what I've experienced. Ty for your comment:)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 26, 2009

great minds ama.......hey?

MrAnonymousBoise, Idaho USASep 26, 2009

It's hard to capture my interest with a poem...and especially with a positive one. Great poem!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 27, 2009

:) Khaled i'm happy you could live in the words while reading. That in itself is fulfilling for me as is the intent for readers to get lost within, ty for your thoughts an kindness my friend:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 27, 2009

Ha Ama seem's it's two against one again here lol. Cheers an ty:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 27, 2009

Rule a thumb wildkitty always a shower first oh a hot soapy one that is lol. Cheers an ty for your comment:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaSep 27, 2009

A sense of good write crosses my mind to have captured your interest in this mr anonymous, cool an ty for your comment a honest views too :)

DropTheInew york, New York USAApr 19, 2011

someone would love this.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaApr 19, 2011

Thanks DroptheI, it would have been sweet to write this about a special lady.