Nothing seems to go right! Everything is falling apart. My life feels so wasted, My heart with sorrow tainted! Who am I ,does anybody cares? Come and love me if you dare! Even the famous and rich will die! If they go through another day like this! Mothers warned their daughters, not to live a life so lonely like mine. I could spring a few surprise! Whom am I kidding in this life?! The rain pours down on my agony, It soothe my mind ,an irony! Like my father come to pass, Thirty years has gone so fast. Music seem to lose it's song, What is the purpose of living so long? Bitterness replacing love slowly, The end is near reaching empty. Still believing a lost cause, A miracle to change my lying course.
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Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
Listening to Lighthouse :(wake me up when sept ends) while feeling this
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaJun 14, 2012
Deep write Morgen. Thank you for sharing
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 14, 2012
Love this piece,nicely composed
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAJun 15, 2012
Morgen, Intense and deep this one. I hope that you start feeling better. Your poem is sad too. I feel for you, for I was once there. Take care. Bless U, P.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJun 15, 2012
Nothing seems to go right! Everything is falling apart. My life feels so wasted, My heart with sorrow tainted! Who am I ,does anybody cares?
Dear Morgen,
Your friends on Poets corner care...Such a deep poem.
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 29, 2018
Thank you Ahyra
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 29, 2018
Thank you poetnumber 1
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 29, 2018
Thank you PinkP a
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 29, 2018
We are all here for you Morgen. This write was long ago and I hope a better horizon is waiting for you now. Loneliness is all around us but life has many things to offer if you look for them.Our happiness is within us and only you can make it happen. Deep write and thanks for sharing. SM
morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 24, 2019
Thank you SM Its still lurking in the dark But now I'm seeing brighter days
Comments (13)
Intense and deep this one. I hope that you start feeling better. Your poem is sad too. I feel for you, for I was once there. Take care. Bless U, P.
Everything is falling apart.
My life feels so wasted,
My heart with sorrow tainted!
Who am I ,does anybody cares?
Dear Morgen,
Your friends on Poets corner care...Such a deep poem.
Kathy
Its still lurking in the dark
But now I'm seeing brighter days