On the dock he sits The hour is early Steam off his coffee Lake hosts scattered mist.
Gentle peace settles in His mind places too Years that have gone To where he is now.
Harbour lights in fade Four seasons a year Some hosting smile Others passing tear.
Loons in the distance Echo the mist Coffee's half full Check marked......bucket list.
Hand reaches down Tails in wag Companions for years Many more to share.
Children now grown in life of their own Magnets capture crayoned past times Cottage mantle setting of old photographs His thoughts rekindled those smiles and laughs.
That first day he fished with his son aside Vows they exchanged when he married his bride Special moment when his first grandchild arrived Feeling blessed to be healthy and spiritly live.
That morning on the dock with his coffee half full A comfortable smile, a mind that found peace Memorable moment's flutter the mist No self regret he's settled within~
Very lovely Bentlee, how you doing? Haven't seen you here for ages Your poem is just great, it reminded me a little of the 'sat on a park bench like book ends' S&G line - not exactly but giving the same tender image of aging.
Hello Redex, ty for reading my write, glad you could relate to the years passing by, cheers, I hope you are well.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 24, 2012
Hi Bentlee, I read this when you first posted it, then I came back to it....then read it again...then had a think about it....dunno about you but I think this has got to be one of the best things you have written in a long time....maybe even since "A moment to"......Only my opinion....Hope you are well and good your end my friend....Andrew
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 24, 2012
I'm glad I got to read this Bentlee :) Wonderful writing..& touching. Cant beat those diamond moments .. over a strong mug of coffee & wag of a tail :)
Lady Bee, so sorry for taking so long to comment, ty so much for your's I'm glad it took you back to a good place for a while lol. Yes I've not been around for some time. Too much on the go here.
Hi Andrew, yes it's been some time eh. Ty and yes things are well this end, hope we can chat sometime. Glad you liked it, sorry for posting so late, cheers my friend,
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Haven't seen you here for ages
Your poem is just great, it reminded me a little of the 'sat on a park bench like book ends' S&G line - not exactly but giving the same tender image of aging.
Wonderful writing..& touching.
Cant beat those diamond moments .. over a strong mug of coffee & wag of a tail :)