Road to Nowhere

The road appeared different today
Perhaps it was the grey dank sky
That bled desolation
That made it look
As if misery had overtaken it

Scattered boxes, riotous revelry mementos
Lay discarded, abandoned by humanity
(Or some may say inhumanity)
And brightly coloured lids, when asked
Mostly replied, “Ham Cheese and Pineapple”

Fresh holes, those pock marked decaying scars
Seeming devoid of any compassion
What scurrying animals had left
In a flurry of desperation, but unknown to them
Would never let them escape their misery

And the trees, as if with wanton need
Had shed their belongings
Retreating, seeking another guise
As if desperation, always looked better
When barren and naked

The road looked different today
As if misery had strolled on by
And left that odour of hopelessness
Maybe I should not have walked that way
But it was my only path
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
I love being a miserable git!!!

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Comments (46)

vyoleta
Feel miserable and write poetry!!! I love your poem, but, please stop being miserable, just write poems. laugh
Redex
I love my paths to nowhere Rob but must admit these days or maybe all my days I have worn the rose coloured spectacles, I will post you a setgrin I liked your poem though it tells the truththumbs up
niah9
Hi Rob...in a strange way, your poem reminded me of one we had to learn for our poetry finals....that was about pioneers, who went to the promised land, carried the belongings they took, because they meant so much...were gradually discarded, when famine and thirst visited after walking miles along dirt tracks.
Great write.....the sadness and atmosphere, you captured to perfection.....Kathyteddybear
cafetwo2010
Hey Rob..I think you may be on to something here. With your extraordinary style you may be the only one qualified to explore the debths of misery that heretofore has escaped 20th century thought. But seriously..this poem was most unique. I can only imagine what a 300 page book of this type of writing would look like.professor dunno grin thumbs up
Yankee4you
Simply brilliant!!!! handshake beer beer
madtat29
Reminds of a trip to the corner market...lol..good write rob
orientalkoru
Or you could turn around and walk back...cheers Just kidding Rob...like everyone has said...you string words together and create a timeless tapestry, one so beautiful whether you're feeling triumphant or a miserable git...love it, enjoyed it!peace teddybear
Macduff5
Hi Rob,

A very accomplished write even if the subject is a little dour. Somehow it reminded me of Robert Frost but without his rationalising optimism. cheers thumbs up
Ladybee42
laugh And you do it so well Rob - the miserable git thing like!
why fight it if that's your thing eh?

Lovely poem about being miserable Rob



thumbs up purple heart purple heart
LadyMorgana60
Great writing as always Rob .. enjoyed my friend thumbs up wine
trurorob
Thank you Vyolta, I can assure you I am not a miserable person.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Red, glad I am a happy bunny though!
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Kathy, a true honest friend.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Jim.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Chris
Rob
tomboygirl2
Too sad Rob!crying

teddybear
Poetnumber1
Hi Rob we all feel this way at times and you have certainly poured your heart out on the page,poignant deep poetry...well penned happy place thumbs up tip hat M.M
trurorob
Thanks Madtat
Rob
reguiny2006
nothing like serious misery, always has serious undertones, good write,
Phil.
trurorob
Thank you Oriental lady, very kind
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Rob
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Bee, glad you enjoyed
Rob
BBMis4me
Hi trurorob,
You don't know me and I don't know you but... I enjoyed reading the verses what you wrote. I get the impression as if I were reading a small piece of a big and beautiful novel. A novel about someone so special. With a special sensitivity in his heart too.

Thanks for letting us enjoy your talent.

Blessings :)
Stellangel
trurorob
Cheers LadyM, hope you are okay.
Rob
hedistuff
very nice rob....seems there's room in the direction and atmosphere of this ditty for an extended far ranging version. it's the end of the world as we know it.
trurorob
Thank you Phylis, hope you are getting better.
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Natasha
Rob
jazzy75
Brilliant write Rob! Each time I read...found something different.thumbs up
trurorob
Cheers MM
Rob
Earlgreytea
[The road looked different today
As if misery had strolled on by
And left that odour of hopelessness
Maybe I should not have walked that way
But it was my only path]

wow! great, emotive, and thought-provoking write!!!
gnj4u
Hi, turorob,
The road looked different today As if misery had strolled on by... In spite of these moments, we humans manage to find something within ourselves (and through love and support of others) that allows us to continue to travel our only path. Springtime moments beckon.
CelticPoet12
Wow Trurorob, this really spun my head around and gave me plenty to digest. All is a good way. The way you endng this piece was something I hadn't counted on. So many interesting comments and I have my lasting impression to linger on my poetic taste buds. Something clearly amazing about this level of misery!~ I agree, brillant write. Thanks for sharing. Delighted and inspired. Celtic!~
wine
Happygolucky4uonline today!
You have painted quite a picture for someone to see
with this lovly descriptive write. And the title so
aptly fitting the road to nowhere. Some are happy
being a miserable ol git.My daddy never had a good
day in his life. And he always seemed right proud of it. laugh I find often the feeling of misery is a
choice. I can't do it for long uh oh But bless your
heart if you enjoy it then go for it thumbs up It
sure does make the pen in hand (so to speak) write
a beautiful piece of work teddybear
trurorob
Thanks Phil
Rob
trurorob
Thank you BBMiss
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Hedistuff, yeah I may follow it up, who knows.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Jazzy my buddy!!
Rob
Ahyra
Your style is unique my friend, love it, another great poem
trurorob
Thanks Earl
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Joy.
Rob
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