We ran with lions across the wild Serengeti Scaled the Himalayas for the elusive yeti Danced the dance of the glorious antelope As we lived our romance in kaleidoscope
Spreading young wings wider than the albatross As time drifted on by in clouds of candyfloss Along the Nile we collected crocodile tears Swam with dolphins who allayed any fears
Floated in time with the brightest humming bird Roamed over the plains with a mighty bison herd Absorbed blood red sunsets in a desert dream Waited for the stars in a glorious array of agleam
Saw polar bears stare as we scaled the frozen land All these we discovered never leaving hand in hand Then history tells us that time becomes an outcast As the wonder years sped on by from first to last
Our world had now spun from dawn to full eclipse As you parted that final kiss upon my cold lips Take me my love further than I have ever been And let me see the future that your eyes have seen
Across all the rivers and over the many oceans From mountain tops to the desert of emotions Take me my love to be always by your side And allow our memories as your life’s guide
She scattered my ashes across her life Upon the plains that had seen so much strife She took them higher than an eagle dare And deeper than a heart could ever share
Will you weep to capture all of our past Will tears lie as salt lakes until the last Scatter me my love upon your very soul Scatter me wherever you lay your bowl Scatter me amongst all your sad emotions Scatter me once again as you cross the Oceans
And when all to you appears to be lost And life seems to be covered in the cold frost Take heart my love and hear the new fawn And live and live upon the new dawn
well you know how I feel about Bowl of Cherries.....I have a feeling this is close to replacing it...lovely isn't good enough Rob, but you know what I mean.....Kathy
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKApr 29, 2014
a poem of epic proportions Rob delivering a wealth of emotions great pen hugs
RedexNorthumberland, England UKApr 29, 2014
A wonderful read a wonderful poem of a lifes journey I have read a few times now Rob you are a true poet.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKApr 29, 2014
A wonderful read a wonderful poem of a lifes journey I have read a few times now Rob you are a true poet.
She scattered my ashes across her life And upon the plains of all our dreams She took them higher than an eagle dare And deeper than a heart could ever wander
I love this poem Rob, your talent knows no bounds,times.
I have missed reading your poetry Rob! So glad I could stop by and catch this one. Fantastic as always my friend.
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 2, 2014
Hi Rob,
Very impressive piece. Very clever use of rhyme with meaning. You have certainly raised the bar in terms of a quality write. I enjoyed your imagery and the structure of ideas in this one very much.
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 5, 2014
A picture of the beauty of the world and the dreams of sharing with the one, A picture of keeping your mind and soul there to make sure she is never alone. giving all
Hi, trurorob, Spreading young wings wider than the albatross and tears lie as salt lakes kissing the earth are among the many poetic images worth finding in the poet's Scattering. Thanks for sharing.
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Enjoyed much !
Mick.
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Ken
moving, truly
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Makes me wish I was in places
Of your poem.
Rob
I have read Scattering a few times now, Just Stunning...
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Rob
And upon the plains of all our dreams
She took them higher than an eagle dare
And deeper than a heart could ever wander
I love this poem Rob, your talent knows no bounds,times.
Rob
Very impressive piece. Very clever use of rhyme with meaning. You have certainly raised the bar in terms of a quality write. I enjoyed your imagery and the structure of ideas in this one very much.
Rob
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A picture of keeping your mind and soul there to make sure she is never alone.
giving all
A deep interesting poem full of feeling
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Spreading young wings wider than the albatross and tears lie as salt lakes kissing the earth are among the many poetic images worth finding in the poet's Scattering. Thanks for sharing.