The Note

The letter lay alone
In a mailbox red with rust
Its loneliness apparent
By the layers of forgotten dust
The envelope tinged yellow
As time wished to show its age
The corners bent and crinkled
As if it tried to escape the cage

But love is not your kingdom
When the castle has no moat
And passion will never sail
When rejection sank the boat
So once again his eyes did cast
Upon the bleak and yellowed note
That lay within the mailbox
Seeming to bear a cruel wry gloat

It bore no stamp or postmark
That sense of barren to the mind
Yet it smelt so slightly scented
The sense of an emotional bind
He clasped it tightly to his chest
In pleading hope of a stirring rush
But love will still lie unrequited
When devotion is a one way crush
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Posted: Jun 2016
About this poem:
Self explanatory, I hope, like the note!

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Comments (55)

southmiami4321online now!
Things are so hard when there is a only a one way crush....
Sweet write Rob, enjoyed it! SM
godsprincessonline today!
Oh dear! So very sorrowful. Wonderful write Rob. Can see the lonely man standing looking lost at the mailbox.

Kathy teddybear
Abby1963
Fought a tear time eye .beautifully written Rob hug
Abby1963
Sorry your poem brought a tear to my eye. Beautifully written Rob hug
doglover14
How very beautiful and sad this write was.

It brought tears to my eyes.

Why do our hearts have to know such pain?

Mady hug
cafetwo2010
A beautiful piece of work this is Rob, and
fablously penned. Unrequited love can
burn deep.
Cafe
Redex
sad but as always beautifully penned. Without the emotion the note would not excist.hug
trurorob
Thanks SM
Rob
Macduff5
Hi Rob,

A great piece of writing. I think we all remember those objects that linger when love is lost. Cheers wine
trurorob
Thank you Kathy, I try to paint a picture.
Rob
Nuwahri61
Hi Rob.........Really enjoyed this .......another classic write......Regards Nugrin
rapturecapture
Hi Rob

I can only say one word after reading a few times over...Magnificent!


Martina xxx teddybear heart wings bouquet
trurorob
Thank you Laura.
Rob
candykid
Outstanding piece....you've always had a knack for this story-tell style of writing.
trurorob
Thanks Mady
Rob
Earlgreytea
Wow! Classic Rob!
It bore no stamp or postmark
That sense of barren to the mind
Yet it smelt so slightly scented
The sense of an emotional bind
He clasped it tightly to his chest
In pleading hope of a stirring rush
But love will still lie unrequited
When devotion is a one way crush

Epic! thanks for sharing!
trurorob
Cheers Jim
Rob
Happygolucky4u
Sadly written very well. And self explanatory. I must say one way crushes are quite painful. Thank you for a beautifully written piece on it. rose
Vronerl
Very beautiful expressed... touching, especially when you understand these words well.....
trurorob
Thanks Red, hope you are well.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Rob
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Nu
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Martina.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Christian
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Earl, hope you are well.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Sherri.
Rob
Supina
You are a poet Rob. No doubt about it.

Deep emotions, I felt it. Thank you.

Sup purple heart
trurorob
Cheers Veroni
Rob
sophiasummer
To be held crushed against the heart.
A beauty stilled.

Sophia
giniwinn
one of the best i have across in my life,superb execution intense feelings yet a quite objective perception...unique is the word. so this is Poetry Wow !
roseoscura
Dear Rob...how did I miss this masterpiece of " Unrequited Love" maybe because I was away too long from PC.......Roses are crushed to bring forth fragrance,so are the outpourings of a heart crushed.Sadness makes the best poets.How are you dear Rob?purple heart hug
giniwinn
just not worth the effort
trurorob
And so it starts again Sshore, I shall not be drawn into your web, I shall not comment again, so dont bother to me again, others know the truth.
giniwinn
i have what my Creator gave me. peace love empathy sensitivity good will.

you knew it from the very first time it is me shores then why did you not say so? you coward.

you and the other poets shame on you for maligning me.

i am tired.
i do not permit anyone to encroach upon my time and my attention.

yes i am leaving RIP !

do not get complacent you never know when / if i come back!

No RIP for you... tru?rorob.
giniwinn
others know the truth?
why don't i know the truth all of you made up?
trurorob
Thank you Suoina.
Rob
Happychatty1online today!
Love this poem Rob ..thanks for sharing it applause
trurorob
Cheers Sophie
Rob
sophiasummer
Happy New Year Rob

"No more electric fences"

wave

cheering
trurorob
Thanks Rosecura
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