El Parque

I sit between two circles
On a bench cast in iron
Pitted with age and memories
Beneath my feet lie
Paths of crazy paving
Trying to mock
All that is order in life
A grassed outer circle
Sits sheltered by trees
Each of differing hues
Rooted to life
Fighting for space
In a genetic battle
Where light
Is their only master
Small insects travel
Hither and thither
Searching for existence
But never sure
Where it may lie
But seeming to understand
That it is here somewhere



The small inner circle
Is ringed in iron spears
Sharp and erect
Like a guard of honour
Flowers form a barricade
To the inner sanctum
Grateful for the wisps
Of life giving spray
Repaying their dues
With an abundance of colour
A small fountain
Cascades back into itself
With that soft caress
Only water can exude
Mesmerising my thoughts
Spreading its gentle fall
Over my very being
Until I seem to reach
A state of pure peace
It is only here
For that moment in time
That life
Stalls
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Posted: May 2015
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Its a peaceful place.

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shadow1950
how delightful Rob and what a paradise you make it sound. Zen springs to mind. As always a superb pen hugs
GadfIy
Rob

I love the descriptive prose you use to bring this scene to life - it not only draws the reader in, but makes (this reader, at least) wish he was there enjoying such an idyll.

Regards

Bill wine wine
beautifulyou
rob,
another beauty!

i love your wonderful weaving -the back and
forth- between outer movement and still life,
and then how you came to pure peace!

ty for sharing this with us.
it's exquisitely written hug purple heart
lindsyjones
Until I seem to reach
A state of pure peace
It is only here
For that moment in time
That life
Stalls


Rob, a very intriguing thoughts evoked on life. Your description of humanity finding that beacon that leads to survival is most described in a very elusive way.

The last lines, a glimpse of reality well expressed. Acceptance. .no more no less.

Inspiring Rob.

Take care. bouquet wine
Abby1963
Awesome poem Rob!, wine
Nuwahri61
Brilliant write Rob.............I was right there beside you mate ........seeing what you saw feeling what you felt........regards Nuthumbs up
trurorob
Thank you Linda
Rob
chisommikelson
HELLOW TRUROROB,
"Beneath my feet lie
Paths of crazy paving
Trying to mock
......where light is
their only master"
PLEASE CAN YOU MAKE CLEARER THE SENSE YOU CONNOTE IN THOSE LINES?
CHISOMMIKELSON
trurorob
Hi Chissom,
I tried to mail you personally but was blocked so I am posting my answer to your questions here.
This writer sees poetry as writing outside the norm but keeping within most boundaries of reality.
We humans see order in life as neat and tidy and obeying laws, things in order like straight lines or level, therefore crazy paving to us doesnt seem to obey these laws, so because we can like it and appreciate its own kind of beauty is it seen as trying to mock all that is in order in life.

Trees must have an awareness that to survive they must have light, without it they die, therefore it is a battle to reach it before others and try to keep it by being the highest, so within reason it must be a genetic battle that they have to win.
I hope this explains what I meant, I feel we cannot have boundaries to what we think, but they must make some sort of sense.
Have a good day.
Rob
candykid
Actually Chisom......you are dealing with an expert. I admire your comment, but in all seriousness, it is unwarranted in it's content.
socrates44online today!
Rob

A true masterpiece!
This is exquisite free verse.
The line layout is great, with pauses that create a sense of metre and highlight the vivid imagery painted and the message conveyed.
The writing style is very compact and clear.
An excellent tapestry depicting Nature in action!

Great Job!
trurorob
Cheers Bill, it is a relaxing place.
Rob
Happygolucky4uonline today!
That moment when life stalls and all is one for me is the essense of life. Beautifully written and described. rose
trurorob
Thanks Jae.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Lindsy.
Rob
beautifulyou
Revisiting this,
your beauty to us Rob
Thank you bouquet
trurorob
Thank you Abby
Rob
reguiny2006
Hello Rob, Your style is quite unique, and tells of emotion expressed in its own individual style, your talent shines through in this site where talent is common place.
pHIL;cheers
trurorob
Cheers Nu.
Rob
madtat29
Sounds a good place to meditate on life...good write sir...later Robhandshake
trurorob
Cheers Candykid
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Socrates
Rob
Mizzy4
The ability of the poet to abstract beauty
from life's simple things is very evident
in this fine write Rob.

Really enjoyed the read......Mick.handshake
trurorob
Thanks Sherri.
Rob
trurorob
Thank you BY
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Soph, hope you are well.
Rob
Poetnumber1
Great write Rob! Always a pleasure to read your work.
123whisper
Wonderful.
trurorob
Cheers Phil.
Rob
niah9
You have a unique style Rob, that is classy yet appears a simple style .....the sign of a true poet who writes with passion.........Kathyteddybear
trurorob
Thanks Paloma, hope all is well.
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Tony.
Rob
Bludylasky
Hi rob :)
Fantastic imagery, excellent word choice, beautifully crafted and thought provoking.
Sitting on benches cast in iron can become painful after a while, remember to stretch your legs occasionally. ;)
Elle x
trurorob
Cheers Mick, would be nice to see you back here at some time.
Rob
avias
Rob, my friend......such a description of being at peace ..all woven together as it truly is in life! You brought us a celebration of the best part of a day in "The Park". Salut!wine Avias
trurorob
Cheers MM
Rob
trurorob
Thank you Thea.
Rob
fjamesj9701
Good stuff Mr Rob and a pleasure to read from you... Cheers old friend... Jesse
trurorob
Thanks Kathy.
Rob
southmiami4321online today!
Donde encontramos paz y pensamientos para dejarlos correr.
El Parque es una pieza de tu estilo y muy bello.SM
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