El Parque

I sit between two circles
On a bench cast in iron
Pitted with age and memories
Beneath my feet lie
Paths of crazy paving
Trying to mock
All that is order in life
A grassed outer circle
Sits sheltered by trees
Each of differing hues
Rooted to life
Fighting for space
In a genetic battle
Where light
Is their only master
Small insects travel
Hither and thither
Searching for existence
But never sure
Where it may lie
But seeming to understand
That it is here somewhere



The small inner circle
Is ringed in iron spears
Sharp and erect
Like a guard of honour
Flowers form a barricade
To the inner sanctum
Grateful for the wisps
Of life giving spray
Repaying their dues
With an abundance of colour
A small fountain
Cascades back into itself
With that soft caress
Only water can exude
Mesmerising my thoughts
Spreading its gentle fall
Over my very being
Until I seem to reach
A state of pure peace
It is only here
For that moment in time
That life
Stalls
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Posted: May 2015
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Its a peaceful place.

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trurorob
Thats some comment Amfa, cheers.
Rob
jazzy75
Rob, you ole devil....I see you are still up to writing fantastic poetry! However, next time it stalls ....you might want to make sure the clutch has been correctly released in gear. frustrated yay Hope you have been well my friend.hug Perhaps Dolly may be paying us a visit soon?peace
soulgoddess
wonderful imagery.
wishing you well angel
trurorob
Thanks Elle, miss you.
Rob x
godsprincessonline today!
Very beautiful and peaceful Rob. Just reading it one can transport thyself into this peaceful environment. Thanks for sharing.

Kathy teddybear wave
nonsmoker
nice thumbs up
trurorob
Thank you Avias
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Jesse
Rob
trurorob
Thanks SM
Rob
trurorob
Cheers Jazzy, my friend.
Rob
cherryreggae
Lovely beautiful words with deep thoughts...enjoyed reading thanks for sharingheart beating teddybear
trurorob
Thank you Soulgoddess
Rob
sophiasummer
I am so happy it is a peaceful place.

You'.d probably be allergic to kaikoura grass.

sigh
rolling on the floor laughing
trurorob
Thanks Kathy
Rob
Supina
You took me to that "parque"... thank you Rob,

I may consider myself already your fan =)
trurorob
Cheers Nonsmoker
Rob
candykid
Truly a better read the second time around.....the sign of high quality poetry....thumbs up
trurorob
Cheers Jim.
Rob
sophiasummer
Little creatures
Such an order!
trurorob
Thanks Sherri, havent seen you for a while.
Rob
trurorob
Thanks Soph, just allergic to travelling a long way!!
Rob xx
salamuna
Until I seem to reach
A state of pure peace

very emotional and shiny poem. a good style..My compliments Rob
Mizzy4
Just reading some of your poems this morning Rob and decided that this one deserves another run.
Great imagery expertly portrayed.
One of my favourites for sure.

Regards Mick

wine
southmiami4321online today!
There are so many places in nature that we can find peace with our thoughts. This is one amazingly written. Thanks for sharing. SM
trurorob
Thanks Mick, not been aired for a long time
Rob
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