Flourishing from a parched earth without hope Plastic red rose fading pink on dark grave Thrown down an overgown river bank slope Worthless lifeless object no need to save
A moment once for a sad occassion shared Arranged so neatly in a styrofoam base Such as a life where pain was never spared Or cut bleeding from thorns in any case
Was a life never dried and blown to dust When many frequent rains had came to pass Growing tall and straight from the earth's soft crust As tender as blades of new velvet grass
Life is like light being born so must pass Stained glass windows through shards of broken glass
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
Why have people substituted so much worthless junk in place of so many beautiful and natural things?
Why have people substituted so much worthless junk in place of so many beautiful and natural things? Its music to my ears to hear another human being echo the same question/s I've asked myself. Beautiful sonnet...would love to try my hands again on this form...but my head is all over the place right now... for me to right sonnets I have to actually sit down and ponder...thanks again for sharing
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 27, 2012
I shake my head too at why some would rather appreciate bits of junk rather than the true value of mother earth..a debate for sure
Thought provoking sonnet Yankee and enjoyed
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 27, 2012
Flourishing from a parched earth without hope Plastic red rose fading pink on dark grave
Nothing looks worse on a grave than plastic flowers...Nice write Yankee.
Morgana... yep...this whole world is getting entangled in our own webs of insecurity and unreality....because nothing is fresher or more sought after than what's real and felt in our hearts or more beautiful....no matter how you measure it up...
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 28, 2012
Yet another beautiful sonnet Yankee...
Bill
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKAug 28, 2012
Lasting Beauty by: Yankee4you Hello Yankee.. Thank you for another really great poem with such great depth- How true your thought provoking sonnet is..sadly we are in a plastic throw away society .which has us in its vice like grip so tight.. synthetic materialism many people are becoming plastic and like unfeeling machines how sad. Emotionally crippled by so much mechanization that's thinking and brain washing our lives. Realism mm Hugs Livy X A moment once for a sad occassion shared Arranged so neatly in a styrofoam base Such as a life where pain was never spared Or cut bleeding from thorns in any case Life is like light being born so must pass Stained glass windows through shards of broken glass
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 28, 2012
Another excelling write Yankee,you do produce some class sonnets M.M
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Thought provoking sonnet Yankee and enjoyed
Plastic red rose fading pink on dark grave
Nothing looks worse on a grave than plastic flowers...Nice write Yankee.
Bill
Hello Yankee.. Thank you for another really great poem with such great depth- How true your thought provoking sonnet is..sadly we are in a plastic throw away society .which has us in its vice like grip so tight.. synthetic materialism many people are becoming plastic and like unfeeling machines how sad.
Emotionally crippled by so much mechanization that's thinking and brain washing our lives.
Realism mm Hugs Livy X
A moment once for a sad occassion shared
Arranged so neatly in a styrofoam base
Such as a life where pain was never spared
Or cut bleeding from thorns in any case
Life is like light being born so must pass
Stained glass windows through shards of broken glass