She stood so statuesque with gazing eyes Wearing all the latest fashions with grace Where hidden in a smile could not disguise Any meaning from her suggestive face
Mona Lisa eye lashes in fashion Skin white as finest alabaster clay Hair changing colors as leaves in season Her style was always the style for the day
Perked and prized inside of her gilded cage Passerby fancied her perfecting shapes Rivaling as best ancient goddess stage Piety once dressed in immortal drapes
The street lights reflecting her long white gloves Ideal is... is the mannequin who loves
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Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
Commenting on a rather bizarre fascination with model-like mannequins on display in a local shop always dressed in the latest fashion while walking along Main Street at night behind her tall pane of glass....so just just kinda going with it......pure poetry needs really no reason ay all....just rhymes sometimes....right...??
You have to get that thought out of your head Jazzy girl, blow up doll's eh? I loved the part where he takes her on the back of his bike and everyone else sees a mannequin except him.
Jazzy..... Oh my.... i sure do love your freedom to critique this poem...but blow up dolls....??? really??? I'm blushing!!!
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 14, 2012
She stood so statuesque with gazing eyes Wearing all the latest fashions with grace Where hidden in a smile could not disguise Any meaning from her suggestive face
I'm sure a handsome man like you Yankee...Would NEVER have to resort to a blowup doll.
This is a lovely imaginative poem...Often when I see these Mannequins I'm sure I see them move.
Comments (9)
What reason do you need to write a sonnet? This is very original and it makes alot of sense to me.
A lovely poem Yankee, I guess we all have an ideal and Mannequins are so 'versatile'
I don't know...but for some reason....your comment brought to mind....one of those blow up dolls...
Wearing all the latest fashions with grace
Where hidden in a smile could not disguise
Any meaning from her suggestive face
I'm sure a handsome man like you Yankee...Would NEVER have to resort to a blowup doll.
This is a lovely imaginative poem...Often when I see these Mannequins I'm sure I see them move.