Fire Kids Cafetwo Challenge

candykid

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Apr 2014 732 Views 11 comments

Fire Kids (Cafetwo Challenge)

Author: candykid

Most children touch fire once...
Learning to never touch it again...
Some children seem to forget the pain...
Touching the hot coals again....
A few children seem to never learn...
Constantly getting themselves burned...
But one child knows no other way...
Hot coals is where he constantly lays....

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Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (11)

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 24, 2014

excellently drawn piece so very true in reality loved it christian touching truth

Girlygirl196349

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 24, 2014

Love it!! Awesome write!!!

::wave:

Joseph1112

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaApr 24, 2014

Brilliant write candykid!

Sinclair_RHR

Sinclair_RHRCyberSpace, Missouri USAApr 24, 2014

Hey Christian,
Very Profound, as ever...Great write
Just got your e-mail.
Robert

Mizzy4

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 24, 2014

C.k. this is the poetry genre
that you own ! Mick.
Great poem !

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 25, 2014

Excellent write Candykid. Cheers

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 28, 2014

Thank you everyone for your kind and specific comments. .....always such a pleasure to read this positive feedback.

fjamesj9701

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 28, 2014

I think Im guilty of the above, I use to always set things on fire or stick something in the light socket. Good read CK…Jesse

Odette67

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 28, 2014

Superb poem Candykid.

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 29, 2014

your beautiful sharing brought this image forward ck

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i don't know if we walk through sacred fire, or if it
moves through us... maybe a little bit of both?

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 14, 2018

Beautiful, where have you gone? .....

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