Death Scape

by boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario, Canada

Mar 2010 1,346 Views 22 comments

Death Scape

An absence of thought.
Dreamscape or naught.
Reborn again perhaps
Or blackness collapse.
Recline in fluffy cloud
Or burn and cry loud.
Poltergeist with aura
Or no more tomorrow.
Does anyone yet know?
Where we finally go...?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2010

About this poem:

Loss/Death Theme
Researching this could
have fatal consequences...lol.

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Comments (22)

PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMar 12, 2010

This is a different kind of poem. I hope you're alright. Take care.

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAMar 12, 2010

I like it.Very deep for so short of a poem.Alot conveyed in a few lines.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 12, 2010

Yah I'm fine PinkPoetress. Thanks for your concern.
Just covering all subjects and role playing while
doing it. Gotta due some humour soon tho...lol.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 12, 2010

Thanks Madtat. Trying to cover the
possibilities. Hope we go to Heaven.

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAMar 12, 2010

Great poem!

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 12, 2010

Unique!!!!!!!! Short with impact.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 13, 2010

Hey Larry, good new style, well done!!,obviously in Jazzy mode!!
rob

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAMar 16, 2010

Interesting title...scape - a picture or representation; or aphetic form of escape. You really left me thinking with this poem boyshchrm. I like it!...lol...no...I love it!!

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 25, 2010

Thanks Heidistuff. The Great unknown
for sure.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 27, 2010

Thanks Paloma. The age old question.
Some think they know the answer, but
truly does anyone know for certain?

NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKMar 27, 2010

Nobody knows. I'm a hell person myself

More exiting

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 21, 2010

Glad you liked it Jazzy...perhaps
because its kinda Jazzy styled...lol.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 26, 2010

Thanks for your comment Rob.Don't go for long my friend.

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaMar 15, 2011

Perhaps more exciting NES if you mean
having a hot time but I am told rather
painfull and not much sleep!! TY I'll
take the fluffy cloud scenario.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 16, 2011

I was worried when I first read this boyshchrm....I really wondered if something was wrong....but I see a year ago...but not able to answer your question, but you know I've moved...well the last house I always felt someone was watching me when I was writing...even on CS....my friend said to tell them to go away...but the cats...never settled there, and ran through the house like the devil was after them...true....Niah

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 16, 2011

Boyshchrm6 done a bit of research myself and had a bit of an experiance, but decided to leave well alone, whatever or even if there are different dimensions to all I have enough job living in the here and now, so shut my mind to all else. Thought again provoking

boyshchrm6OPbarrie, Ontario CanadaApr 12, 2011

So Niah..I guess your vote
would be "poltergeist with aura"
then...lol. TY for your comment

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusApr 13, 2011

[Poltergeist with aura]
loved this phrase, nice write Canada...

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaApr 14, 2011

Wow.. intruiging and thought provoking... We all have our own ideas... but no, none of us can really ever know... I guess that is where faith comes in... Kudos on a marvellous write!