The Siren's Song

How oft we seek the unattainable,
And the controllers know how to control,
I can jump through hoops,
And the voices certainly told me so,
“La belle dame sans Merci hath thee enthrall.”
The Romantic ideal is always flawed,
That’s just the way of things.
The sirens’ voices called,
I couldn’t resist,
Even tied to the mast,
My soul burst from my body,
Though it was so tightly bound,
I had to have you in whatever way,
And whatever humiliations,
You placed upon me,
Physical love does that,
It mesmerizes and cajoles.
And you were so intelligent,
I’m sure you knew and know,
What you unleashed.
And yet like all Romantic fantasies,
You were totally unworthy,
And totally dishonest,
And in your own way,
You played those lover’s games.
And I think deep down,
There must be an unsettling.
Too many decent mariners have been lulled,
And in the end,
There must be a realization,
That your way will die,
Like the myth it has been based on.
The sirens' song was once powerful,
But it exists,
Only while we still believe.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
What can I say about this poem? The only fantasy is in the mind of the fantasist. We set our ideals but know that there is no such thing. A basic flaw in human nature I'm afraid to say.

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Comments (18)

peachmelba
That terrible Siren ,devil ,


Melting men into chocolate while she slowly nibbles away at their heart,


Excellent write,



Yes we have all be bitten when smitten,


Me too,


blues .


I was caught up in an idealistic dream ,surreal ,


But I got my mo jo back ie my realisation,


Yes it's good to dream but have eyes wide shut too,

laugh .


Here is to you ,wine ,
godsprincess
I love romantic fantasies. I also studied in high Greek and Roman gods, sirens, sea monsters, etc. It sounds like you have them all rolled up in one as well as deeper meaning. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!!angel2
reguiny2006
Macduff, At your very best in each powerful line.

Phil.
marikia
It's been tough, but the poet found his way of coping. He is lucky to have what is needed to resort to in times like this. It is suffering mostly that puts pen into poet's hand. There will be no such realization on her part, I am afraid, she will never acknowledge her unworthiness and dishonesty, thinking life is too short to waste time on wondering what other people think about her. There is more to her egotism, which is that she might have never loved self-forgetfully, never loved someone else the way she loves herself. Dear poet, “Before you can live, a part of you has to die. You have to let go of what could have been...".(Shannon L. Alder). Thank you for sharing. tip hat flower
andrew149
A great write Mac..... I think that real people that behave like this are often doomed to suffer at someones hand in the same way, sometime in their future, and what would we be, if, having loved them, that we could forget that love and not feel sorry for them.... Thought provoking, Thank you!
Andrew...cool
GadfIy
I am familiar with those hoops Rob, having jumped through one or two myself: However, you deal with the iniquity and the aftermath of the dawning realisation far more eloquently than I ever could.

A masterful write, as one might expect from a Professor of English Literature.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
beautifulyou
All of our realizations bring us closer to
knowing what is really true for us

ty for your poem, (((rob))) bouquet
shadow1950
this is superb Rob hope all is well with you hugs
Macduff5
Hi Peach Melba,

A very Australian dish but you seem too understand...smitten and bitten...too true. Thanks for your very perceptive comments.bouquet
Macduff5
Hi Godsprincess,

We can learn so much from mythology.

Cheers bouquet
Macduff5
Hi Marikia,

Thanks for the considered analysis and pertinent quote. It's good to see that some people remain constant.

Cheers,
bouquet
Macduff5
Hi Phil,

That lounge looks so comfortable. Thanks for your comments. wine
Macduff5
Hi Andrew,

This poem is based on experience. Sometimes I cannot gather what people want especially the female of the species. I think I'll die wondering. Good to catch up with you again.

Cheers,
Rob beer
Macduff5
Hi Bill,

Eloquence...come on you are a master of it. As for the professor bit...a little exaggerated. Just a humble high school teacher. Thanks for your encouraging words.

Sorry to hear that Newcastle United are facing relegation.

wine wine
Macduff5
Hi Beautiful,

What is really true for us? Profound words and I'm still working on it. Thanks for your considered comment. I still think you are very gorgeous! bouquet
Macduff5
Hi Shadow,

Thanks for you comment. Things are fine with me. wine
trurorob
I suppose we put this ideal scenario in our minds and most times it doesnt match up. We never really know people do we, strong poem Rob.
Rob
Macduff5
Hi Rob,

Too true. I appreciate that we are still pals. All human nature is a wonder. It's never good to idealise but some are just wired that way. cheers
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