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~Flat lining ~

pulse fade's too non, spirit's knockin yet nobody's home. Glued to the wall's encompassing light vision's of real with no eyeball'd sight. On the air lays no weight look down from above personal fate. Flying in midst of silver dart light. Enveloped in ways of transitional fix. Loved ones let go in medium space, irrational thoughts pre open air stride, in conscious mind space fear sets you aside. Time as you knew it's now time to clock out. Your life an time written's been lived out in your life~
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Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
Trying something different an sharing how I felt years ago in a canoe accident.

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Bentleeonline today!
I know alot of people fear death, once you've been on the door step an feel a slight of it, it seem's to help understand accept an prepare for the inevitable.
jazzy75
Bentlee - cool write...and different technique...depending on where you place the pauses...different images are born. thanks my friend!cool cheers
Bentleeonline today!
Hi Jazzy ty my friend, yeah something new in format an for the imagination to play with lol :)
Earlgreytea
lovely Bentlee, thanks, original phraseology...
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