INDIVIDUALLY SUPREME.....

Surrounded by chatter, in a cocoon you stay
Voices pass you by, you've nothing to say
Subjects so varied, discussed one by one
In your own little world, is where you belong

I remember train rides, when in my teens
Travelling to work, past scenery unseen
Programmed to reaching, a station to leave
A carriage of commuters, to exit you weave

Hustle-bustle, towards London grew
Quietly reading a book, there were a few
As those by a window, could turn away
Ignoring the people, they saw each day

I do remember, when surrounded I felt
On the outside looking in, as if I could melt
Disappearing instantly, from physical form
Floating the atmosphere, from moments torn

Sometimes we're happy, alone with thought
Private-personal, imagination caught
Until the time, when ready to share
Special memories, with someone who cares

These people are rare, listen and know
That all have dreams, a place we go
When timing is right, to tell the world
Dreams and hopes, to be unfurled

Finding that person, who shares and cares
Harder than we imagine, becoming a pair
Can souls merge, share different dreams
Woven together, yet individually supreme

Will one over-rule, without a care
For the others needs, or do a pair
Have to share dreams, day by day
Surely this ensures, one dies day to day
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Posted: Jun 2017
About this poem:
Many of us have personal goals, and its wonderful when two share becoming a whole.......without expecting one to let their dreams go.....

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freehand
this is very true. great write
roseoscura
Amazing Write Niah! yes,some expect too much of the other person not realizing they too have their aspirations in life,feelings.Thanks for this wonderful poem.hug
Redex
A brilliant poem and observations on life itself thumbs up
godsprincessonline today!
Very true and I wished I could find my #2. Oh where oh where could he be?

Really enjoyed this one Kathy Down Under - thanks for sharing.

Kathy, North of Down Under! lol hug
niah9
freehand.........thank you..... for your comment, that was appreciated........Kathy....teddybear teddybear
niah9
roseocura.....thank you for your comment.......I am amazed how we can pull from memory....not just thoughts but emotions too...........Kathycheering cheering
niah9
Thank you so much Redex...glad you enjoyed.......Kathyteddybear
niah9
USA Kathy....thank you for the comment....but as we mature, we certainly enter any friendship or relationship with eyes wide open...if we are wise......whether good or bad......I think it is fact....but no one knows who is waiting to step into our life......it's called hope.......NZ and UK Kathy....since I have a foot in both these days......teddybear
southmiami4321online today!
Beautiful observations of simple things life bring our way. When we combine two as a whole without expectations of each other; makes each spirit free to dream....Very nice write that I enjoyed, Niah.
niah9
southmiami....thank you so much....appreciated.....always...Kathycheering
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