Fragile.

~~FRAGILE~~

She
remains perplexed,
desensitized and isolated.
On a bed of inadequate passion, beneath the scorching heat
of him who conquers and brutalizes,
yet claims true affection.

He
lacks the strength
to allow her to remain chaste.
Forked tongue of fire, intense and unaware of the damage he causes,
in her and through her he ravages,
yet the kisses after are so tender.

She is sufficient .
She can satisfy his
lust and disdain.

She is nothing and yet
she remains sufficient .
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
My first poem that anyone else saw; turned it in 8th grade English and got an award. :)

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gnj4u
Hi, 19chellebelle90,
desensitized and isolated. On a bed of inadequate passion is such a powerful expression in a very sad poem but for the kisses after are so tender. Thank you for sharing.
19chellebelle90
Thank you for reading and commenting :)
HeartFeltMale
Very moving poem though I know there are those out there that still believe it should be mutual, pleasing to both not just in it for the ride or themselves kind of thing. He sounds like a selfish pig just my thoughts anyway. Great Job! Thanks For the Share
trurorob
very emotional, well written!
rob
19chellebelle90
thanks rob!! :)
jazzy75
Powerful poem...and written by one so young....well done!
19chellebelle90
Thank you, Jazzy. :) I seem to have lost something in writing heartbreak; but I think it's because I just don't need a place to put it any more. I'm ok with it. :)
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