She remains perplexed, desensitized and isolated. On a bed of inadequate passion, beneath the scorching heat of him who conquers and brutalizes, yet claims true affection.
He lacks the strength to allow her to remain chaste. Forked tongue of fire, intense and unaware of the damage he causes, in her and through her he ravages, yet the kisses after are so tender.
She is sufficient . She can satisfy his lust and disdain.
She is nothing and yet she remains sufficient .
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
My first poem that anyone else saw; turned it in 8th grade English and got an award. :)
Hi, 19chellebelle90, desensitized and isolated. On a bed of inadequate passion is such a powerful expression in a very sad poem but for the kisses after are so tender. Thank you for sharing.
19chellebelle90OPColorado Springs, Colorado USAJun 26, 2010
Thank you for reading and commenting :)
HeartFeltMaleBaldwin, Kansas USAJun 26, 2010
Very moving poem though I know there are those out there that still believe it should be mutual, pleasing to both not just in it for the ride or themselves kind of thing. He sounds like a selfish pig just my thoughts anyway. Great Job! Thanks For the Share
Powerful poem...and written by one so young....well done!
19chellebelle90OPColorado Springs, Colorado USAJul 3, 2010
Thank you, Jazzy. :) I seem to have lost something in writing heartbreak; but I think it's because I just don't need a place to put it any more. I'm ok with it. :)
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desensitized and isolated. On a bed of inadequate passion is such a powerful expression in a very sad poem but for the kisses after are so tender. Thank you for sharing.
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